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7/1/2015 c1 ValkyrieKnight96
Well Jesus (fucking) Christ. Your first reviewer was a total god damn asshole man. Sorry about that. I kinda liked your story though. I mean for one, there's no better way to get hooked than to tell me its a finnceline fic soooooo... And two, your writing was pretty descriptive. :) Although, a little advice to help you out so that your story flows better and is easier to read. Break the dialogue off away from the paragraph so that it doesn't get swept up in the descriptive sentence's. It makes it easier for readers do discern between the two. :) Anyway, I hope you read this and decide to continue your story as I would like read more of it. Bye. :)
2/7/2014 c1 1EarclopsSwordsman
What...

What the actual fuck.

I think this attempt at a "story" went horribly, horribly wrong, if you can even call it a story at all. My god, this is trash, Also, you don't mean for a spoiler YET YOU POST A GIGANTIC SPOILER ANYWAYS! Also, the OC technically isn't your property legally, so anyone can use him without permission.

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