for Of Wind and Darkness7/12/2005 c4 Athenais
Please update this if you find the time for it. It is so unique to see Ranma as vampire and one with troubles.
Please update this if you find the time for it. It is so unique to see Ranma as vampire and one with troubles.
11/14/2004 c4 Guest
I like this story. I wish you would update.
I like this story. I wish you would update.
10/18/2003 c1 werd
In the summary, it's Nermia Wrecking Crew, not Recking Crew.
In the summary, it's Nermia Wrecking Crew, not Recking Crew.
10/29/2002 c4 Final-Fan
This is good so far. Don't listen to anyone who says that it isn't. It's so good, in fact, that I'm afraid I'll have to kill you if you don't continue... :)
This is good so far. Don't listen to anyone who says that it isn't. It's so good, in fact, that I'm afraid I'll have to kill you if you don't continue... :)
10/28/2002 c4 Guest
It was a lot of fun to read, but sofar it all just seems to be the setup for the story.
I'll definitely read more when it comes out
It was a lot of fun to read, but sofar it all just seems to be the setup for the story.
I'll definitely read more when it comes out
10/27/2002 c4 um yeah
Well I like the idea a lot and the first two parts really got me interested but I guess I was just a little disapointed with the rest. For one I just don't think it's dark enough. Ranma seems much to accepting of his position and I think you jumped to far forward without giving us enough details. Secondly, this just a seuggestion and can just ignore it if you want, but it seems like it would be better if Ranma didn't know he was an elmental and you went into detail about how it was hidden from him. I don't know though in the end I just don't think it's not angsty enough. I was hoping for something along the lines of he embraces the darkness but is brought back to the light or he's forced into the darkness and fights back to the light. Also what's up with the Ranma doesn't kill humans part. i just don't think the vampire would simply allow that. It seems more like he would force Ranma to. I don't know I just get kind of annoyed when people write fanfiction where Ranma becomes a creature of darkness and doesn't kill humans. It just doesn't seem very likely that he won't end up killing it even if it's just because he's forced to or he can't control himself. People always try to around that for some reason and it ends up looking like that's exactly what they're doing. However these are just my opinions, if you don't like them or think yours are better then just ignore them and right anyway you want. You're the author after all. I still think it needs to be darker though and that people need to die.
Well I like the idea a lot and the first two parts really got me interested but I guess I was just a little disapointed with the rest. For one I just don't think it's dark enough. Ranma seems much to accepting of his position and I think you jumped to far forward without giving us enough details. Secondly, this just a seuggestion and can just ignore it if you want, but it seems like it would be better if Ranma didn't know he was an elmental and you went into detail about how it was hidden from him. I don't know though in the end I just don't think it's not angsty enough. I was hoping for something along the lines of he embraces the darkness but is brought back to the light or he's forced into the darkness and fights back to the light. Also what's up with the Ranma doesn't kill humans part. i just don't think the vampire would simply allow that. It seems more like he would force Ranma to. I don't know I just get kind of annoyed when people write fanfiction where Ranma becomes a creature of darkness and doesn't kill humans. It just doesn't seem very likely that he won't end up killing it even if it's just because he's forced to or he can't control himself. People always try to around that for some reason and it ends up looking like that's exactly what they're doing. However these are just my opinions, if you don't like them or think yours are better then just ignore them and right anyway you want. You're the author after all. I still think it needs to be darker though and that people need to die.
10/27/2002 c4 skai
I like this, continue
I like this, continue
10/27/2002 c4 
14Sierra-Falls
Keep writing, keep writing!
This seems a well thought out story line. It has none of the halting childish flow that so many others cannot seem to banish. I am interested in reading further chapters.
14Sierra-FallsKeep writing, keep writing!
This seems a well thought out story line. It has none of the halting childish flow that so many others cannot seem to banish. I am interested in reading further chapters.
10/26/2002 c4 7Aytheria
I like this story! I was always very interested in vampires, i've read all vampire books i've come across (fiction ones) and a vampiric twist to Ranma makes it even better. Keep up the story, it's great!
7AytheriaI like this story! I was always very interested in vampires, i've read all vampire books i've come across (fiction ones) and a vampiric twist to Ranma makes it even better. Keep up the story, it's great!
10/26/2002 c4 John Carter
Now that is an interesting way to write a fic. I'm intrigud by this, please continue.
Now that is an interesting way to write a fic. I'm intrigud by this, please continue.