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8/24/2014 c5 
4Antex-The Legendary Zoroark
Good chapter. I hope Kirito will eventually tell Suguha why he was so distant all those years... Please update soon! I'm looking forward to it!
4Antex-The Legendary ZoroarkGood chapter. I hope Kirito will eventually tell Suguha why he was so distant all those years... Please update soon! I'm looking forward to it!
8/24/2014 c4 Antex-The Legendary Zoroark
Great chapter once more! Well, I must say that Kirito took his sister being there better than I expected him to! Lol. The funny part I liked was where Kirito mumbled to himself about his money. Lol.
Great chapter once more! Well, I must say that Kirito took his sister being there better than I expected him to! Lol. The funny part I liked was where Kirito mumbled to himself about his money. Lol.
8/24/2014 c3 Antex-The Legendary Zoroark
And so it begins! I wonder how Kirito/Kazuto will be able to keep his sister alive?
And so it begins! I wonder how Kirito/Kazuto will be able to keep his sister alive?
8/24/2014 c2 Antex-The Legendary Zoroark
This was an amazing chapter! I really enjoyed how you described everything so well! It's like I'm actually a part if the story! Lol.
This was an amazing chapter! I really enjoyed how you described everything so well! It's like I'm actually a part if the story! Lol.
8/24/2014 c1 Antex-The Legendary Zoroark
Interesting! A fanfic where Suguha joins her brother in SAO? Now THIS sounds like a worthy read! If I find this worthwhile, may I borrow a couple ideas from you? Some of this would work well for my fanfic! Keep it up!
Interesting! A fanfic where Suguha joins her brother in SAO? Now THIS sounds like a worthy read! If I find this worthwhile, may I borrow a couple ideas from you? Some of this would work well for my fanfic! Keep it up!
8/1/2014 c5 20flairina
Huh, so because Kirito didn't take the medicine quest, Coper suckered another player and got away without being killed. This fic is definitely going down some paths I haven't seen before, so big points for originality. :)
Have those three STILL not partied up yet? It should be ob- wait, I suppose Kirito wouldn't exactly suggest it, and Suguha and Silica are new to this, so they probably don't even know... huh. Okay, I guess that makes sense. In terms of character, anyways, from a logical standpoint it's stupid, but since Mr. Loner probably doesn't see it that way it makes total sense.
Ah, looks like you're stalled at the moment. Good luck getting back on track, looking forward to more!
20flairinaHuh, so because Kirito didn't take the medicine quest, Coper suckered another player and got away without being killed. This fic is definitely going down some paths I haven't seen before, so big points for originality. :)
Have those three STILL not partied up yet? It should be ob- wait, I suppose Kirito wouldn't exactly suggest it, and Suguha and Silica are new to this, so they probably don't even know... huh. Okay, I guess that makes sense. In terms of character, anyways, from a logical standpoint it's stupid, but since Mr. Loner probably doesn't see it that way it makes total sense.
Ah, looks like you're stalled at the moment. Good luck getting back on track, looking forward to more!
8/1/2014 c4 flairina
Huh, haven't seen a take on Lisbeth/Asuna/Sachi's immediate reactions to the Death Game before, that was interesting.
So, Silica is tagging along too, huh? Intriguing- she's pretty smart for a twelve year old, though seeing as how Sugu is 13 and Kirito is 14, perhaps I'm underestimating the intelligence of kids that age. Regardless, she's not exactly made a main character very often, so it should be good to see where you go with that.
Wonder how the whole "beater" bit will go down with Suguha next to Kirito at the time; it's not like he can just tell her to screw off. Or rather, he can, but the next time she sees him he's gonna get a swift kick to the groin and have her following him around anyways because she'll say he's being really stupid (which he is), so... eheh.
Huh, haven't seen a take on Lisbeth/Asuna/Sachi's immediate reactions to the Death Game before, that was interesting.
So, Silica is tagging along too, huh? Intriguing- she's pretty smart for a twelve year old, though seeing as how Sugu is 13 and Kirito is 14, perhaps I'm underestimating the intelligence of kids that age. Regardless, she's not exactly made a main character very often, so it should be good to see where you go with that.
Wonder how the whole "beater" bit will go down with Suguha next to Kirito at the time; it's not like he can just tell her to screw off. Or rather, he can, but the next time she sees him he's gonna get a swift kick to the groin and have her following him around anyways because she'll say he's being really stupid (which he is), so... eheh.
8/1/2014 c1 flairina
Well, that's an interesting start. Well done developing just how this came about; should be interesting to see how Suguha being there affects Kirito's decisions. Not something I've seen before; very nice thus far.
Well, that's an interesting start. Well done developing just how this came about; should be interesting to see how Suguha being there affects Kirito's decisions. Not something I've seen before; very nice thus far.
7/13/2014 c5 funman1111
we are in need of an update...SO HURRY IT UP! HURRY IT UP BE FORE I STAND THE TWO OF YOU IN A HIGH LEVEL DUNGEON WITH YOUR ONLY WEP BEING A ROCK!
we are in need of an update...SO HURRY IT UP! HURRY IT UP BE FORE I STAND THE TWO OF YOU IN A HIGH LEVEL DUNGEON WITH YOUR ONLY WEP BEING A ROCK!
6/2/2014 c5 2alee26606
I love it I love it I love it...
Coming from a person who didn't watch SAO, I'm loving it...! I hope there is no pairings though... for some reason I want to stick with just adventure and their relationship as bro and sis.. hehe
I really love it... I'm wondering if this happened in the actual anime now. hehe...
Lots of support
Love love
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2alee26606I love it I love it I love it...
Coming from a person who didn't watch SAO, I'm loving it...! I hope there is no pairings though... for some reason I want to stick with just adventure and their relationship as bro and sis.. hehe
I really love it... I'm wondering if this happened in the actual anime now. hehe...
Lots of support
Love love
lEX
5/28/2014 c5 Worker72
You know Leafa will probably still be struggling with her armor when Kirito gets back.
You know Leafa will probably still be struggling with her armor when Kirito gets back.
5/12/2014 c5 20StormFarron185
I haven't read the LN so I don't know what events are original and which are from the LN.
Anyway, I loved this chapter. Though I doubt Kirito, a pro gamer, would forget to get Health Potions in a situation like this. Guess traveling with two girls is pretty distracting. XD.
I wonder what kind of stats those boots had...
Hope to see more soon.
20StormFarron185I haven't read the LN so I don't know what events are original and which are from the LN.
Anyway, I loved this chapter. Though I doubt Kirito, a pro gamer, would forget to get Health Potions in a situation like this. Guess traveling with two girls is pretty distracting. XD.
I wonder what kind of stats those boots had...
Hope to see more soon.