for Ashy- Boy7/24/2014 c3 U don't know me
Good job! I nearly cried at the Gar-bear part. Though I did laugh at the end when I realized that Ash never got Pikachu back.
Good job! I nearly cried at the Gar-bear part. Though I did laugh at the end when I realized that Ash never got Pikachu back.
5/24/2014 c3 GaryFAN
That was awesome and amazing and GAH! You, Poke-sir or miss, are AMAZING!
That was awesome and amazing and GAH! You, Poke-sir or miss, are AMAZING!
2/12/2014 c2 GMW
Hmmm
Hmmm
2/11/2014 c2 
75purplefern
This is defiantly an interesting story, (although I don't think Gary would ever do anything for Team Rocket). I'm wondering about the random switch in POV, though. Like, in the beginning of the chapter it's in 3rd person, but then just randomly switches to 1st person. Might want to be careful about that next chapter. But, like I said, it's still an interesting story, and I'm excited to see what happens next with Team Rocket's rabid pokemon experiment.
75purplefernThis is defiantly an interesting story, (although I don't think Gary would ever do anything for Team Rocket). I'm wondering about the random switch in POV, though. Like, in the beginning of the chapter it's in 3rd person, but then just randomly switches to 1st person. Might want to be careful about that next chapter. But, like I said, it's still an interesting story, and I'm excited to see what happens next with Team Rocket's rabid pokemon experiment.