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5/28/2015 c2 KO chic
I giggled when Tim said that Becky and Tobey like each other. Seriously these two fight like an old married couple. xD
5/28/2015 c1 KO chic
oooh this looks interesting. Everyone is so in character that it feels like I'm watching an episode! Kudos for adding the narrator as well, most fanfiction seems to forget him.
5/10/2015 c6 4zimvids
This is one of the few REALLY well developed BeckyxTobey stories and I thank you so much for that! They dont just immediately want to date one another; you make them have a realistic relationship, starting out as this hot/cold friendship. I love this story so much! Keep up the great work and I really hope you continue this story! :)
5/5/2015 c6 3Potato Beilschmidt
I really love this story! It is so adorable and I hope you haven't given up writing it! You are so in-character with all of the characters and I love your writing style! I hope you update soon! Love this story and good job with what you have! Say thanks to your sister for the inspiration! 3
5/1/2015 c4 Guest
No! You don't talk too much at all XD I'm definitely reading your other works after this
5/1/2015 c3 Guest
Yeesh! My mom did that all the time. It's even worse when your mom tries to set you up with them XP And yeah, in character as always! I've started hearing the character's voices as I read it o.o'
5/1/2015 c1 Guest
I've rarely seen TobeyxWordgirl fanfiction that sticks this close to canon! Everyone was so in character, I hope you continue writing!

(and uh, can I have Cheetos now XD)
4/13/2015 c6 Leviprime
Aww that was nice of Chuck and Brent to give her advice. Tobey y u so stubborn?

Hope U update as soon as you can this is my favorite TobeyxBecky story.
4/12/2015 c5 Leviprime
Ok this is my first time reviewing for this story...This story is lovely like omg my feelings hurt so much T_T I havnt watched Wordgirl for a long time and I think I stopped watching it when it was on season 4 when I was in high school.

Now i regret stop watching it and my Toby and Becky ships returns
3/4/2015 c6 Softgreenseas14
Ehmagawd! This fanfiction was absolutely the best! XDDDD I especially loved Amy because i can picture that being me with Tobey and Dr. Two Brains, since their my favorite villains. And all my friends wold be behind me shaking their heads in disapproval. XDDD lol. But, this story was very well written. Everyone was in character and portrayed right, especially Two Brains, Victoria, Becky, and Tobey. I love this fanfiction and I hope it will be continued. I don't have a fanfiction account but I do write and stories like this just inspire me a lot!I love how you kept the story suitable for kids. i hate it when someone takes a kid series and makes it like a rated R movie. Don't mind so much if it"s rated T as long as there's no super crazy stuff in it and it stays pretty true to the show. Keep writing and stay awesome! :)
2/26/2015 c6 31Arkfrost271
Amazingly well done on this chapter. It was very funny and I liked it great work. :)
2/23/2015 c5 Arkfrost271
Fantastic chapter! I thought it was beautifully awesome keep up the awesome work. :)
2/22/2015 c1 GFTY
Also I think you are well able to fit the characters and articulate their mannerisms very well.

I'll say this is the best Fan Fiction I've ever read - Even if I've probably only read 20 or so on this site.

I made an account just to post a review. Please complete this FF till the end...?
2/22/2015 c6 GFTY
Just wanted to let you know I totally like your Fan Fiction. I'll totally keep reading this. I hope you don't make the story too drawn out though. It seems a lot of people keep going and going and eventually ruin their stories.

I really like this couple and hope things work out well for them. Also 100 thumbs up for "Listen for words", "Narrator", and not making them go directly from hated enemies to devoted lovers right away.

FYI I am a 26 Year old male and I enjoy WordGirl with my College Degree #NotJustAShowForKids
2/15/2015 c6 Guest
That was great! I hope you update soon.
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