for The Pony Who Lived Upstairs8/23/2016 c23 trigrbrony777
It's been a while since the last time I wrote something for this. I'm sad to see this story getting closer and closer to its end, but once again, it gets its thoughts and feelings through to the reader. I know I felt a bit of awkwardness and maybe even his sense of being lost now that the relationships has had its conclusion. But still, there remains the question of who Peach and Ron are to each other and how they'll behave. I've always wondered what's the best approach when dealing with an ex in a similar situation. Perhaps they just need some space or something else to chase after now. Whatever it may be, I look forward to the continuation of this work, and reading the various perspective of these characters. Well done! :D
It's been a while since the last time I wrote something for this. I'm sad to see this story getting closer and closer to its end, but once again, it gets its thoughts and feelings through to the reader. I know I felt a bit of awkwardness and maybe even his sense of being lost now that the relationships has had its conclusion. But still, there remains the question of who Peach and Ron are to each other and how they'll behave. I've always wondered what's the best approach when dealing with an ex in a similar situation. Perhaps they just need some space or something else to chase after now. Whatever it may be, I look forward to the continuation of this work, and reading the various perspective of these characters. Well done! :D
5/4/2016 c21 trigrbrony777
Wow, these last two chapters did not upset. I was apprehensive and worried for these two. Again the imagery and scenarios almost made it feel like I was a tourist there. It felt like I could really see through his eyes like when he meets Grig or Fluttershy. I was kinda worried about how you were gonna deal with the undoing of the spell and the semi-interrogation done by Cadence was probably the strongest point of this chapter. I kind of want to make a note of some of these questions for my self since they really dived into the heart of the matter when it comes to relationships. And it was legitimately shocking how in reality it was actually Pepper who was just faking attraction for her and that it was Peach who still loved him. I'm guessing many other readers would probably hate him for that, but the sad truth is that appearance does matter at least somewhat in relationships. I kind of don't like that, but I can try to live with. After getting this far, I'm getting the feeling that this story is gonna come to a close soon. I'll leave my final thoughts next time. Looking forward to the next chapter. :)
Wow, these last two chapters did not upset. I was apprehensive and worried for these two. Again the imagery and scenarios almost made it feel like I was a tourist there. It felt like I could really see through his eyes like when he meets Grig or Fluttershy. I was kinda worried about how you were gonna deal with the undoing of the spell and the semi-interrogation done by Cadence was probably the strongest point of this chapter. I kind of want to make a note of some of these questions for my self since they really dived into the heart of the matter when it comes to relationships. And it was legitimately shocking how in reality it was actually Pepper who was just faking attraction for her and that it was Peach who still loved him. I'm guessing many other readers would probably hate him for that, but the sad truth is that appearance does matter at least somewhat in relationships. I kind of don't like that, but I can try to live with. After getting this far, I'm getting the feeling that this story is gonna come to a close soon. I'll leave my final thoughts next time. Looking forward to the next chapter. :)
1/20/2016 c19 trigrbrony777
What can I say. Again, a marvelous job with this chapter. You managed to bring Ron into Equestria. I can't wait to see how he describes this world.
Also on the topic of the relationships, I really found his answer to those personal questions particular touching - especially the part where he believes that staying in love for a lifetime would be considered the highest thing to aspire too. And I also wonder how many of us can honestly say they've reached that. That's something I worry about too. Perhaps next chapter will reveal what's in store for them. As always, looking forward to reading more from you. :]
What can I say. Again, a marvelous job with this chapter. You managed to bring Ron into Equestria. I can't wait to see how he describes this world.
Also on the topic of the relationships, I really found his answer to those personal questions particular touching - especially the part where he believes that staying in love for a lifetime would be considered the highest thing to aspire too. And I also wonder how many of us can honestly say they've reached that. That's something I worry about too. Perhaps next chapter will reveal what's in store for them. As always, looking forward to reading more from you. :]
12/8/2015 c18 trigrbrony777
Wow! It's been a while since the last update, and what an update this was.
They finally had to come to terms with the possible ramifications of a love spell.
I find it funny how they're all using an episode as a point of reference, but there's truth to that.
The most important part to this story, and one particular trait that I believe makes this story so special, is how you make it so that the characters are constantly dealing with really hard to grasp concepts and obstacles. Not only does this pique curiosity from the reader, but it also reflects a greater journey towards meaning, very much like the one Peach is doing on Earth. I suggest to keep challenging the characters until you reach a proper conclusion, though considered how tough the subject of love is, it may be hard to reach. Still, I am confident in your writing abilities, and will love to see how this story will progresses.
Best of luck!
Wow! It's been a while since the last update, and what an update this was.
They finally had to come to terms with the possible ramifications of a love spell.
I find it funny how they're all using an episode as a point of reference, but there's truth to that.
The most important part to this story, and one particular trait that I believe makes this story so special, is how you make it so that the characters are constantly dealing with really hard to grasp concepts and obstacles. Not only does this pique curiosity from the reader, but it also reflects a greater journey towards meaning, very much like the one Peach is doing on Earth. I suggest to keep challenging the characters until you reach a proper conclusion, though considered how tough the subject of love is, it may be hard to reach. Still, I am confident in your writing abilities, and will love to see how this story will progresses.
Best of luck!
11/11/2015 c15 
1adhdluke
You have written a pretty damn good story.
So much so that when I'd leave off of a chapter, what would happen next just flooded my mind. I had a hard time thinking because all I could imagine was what might happen next. The story as nearly perfect spelling and grammar, mostly a calm setting, the plot is intriguing, and I absolutely LOVE the characters.
Until the end of chapter 15.
I don't know what the hell happened yet, but so far it seems two completely normal people… ehem…person and pony… just lost their minds. The only semi-logical explanation I can find to this chapter's end is when Cadence used the love spell on the guys that were fighting,it also affected Ron and Peach. Otherwise, I dub them both completely insane.
Just the fact that they disregarded George completely and went straight to bed makes it hard to wrap my mind around it. They weren't even officially dating!
I feel, personally at least, that a part of the story died here with the end of this chapter, at least to me. When I read the part where he "Made love to her for hours" I blinked, stared at it for ten seconds or so, then put my Kindle down.
I didn't sleep very well last night. I still don't fully believe that they would normally, willingly, do that. I will continue reading, but that last part there hurt to read. I'll finish it, assuming the story is finished, though possibly not, seeing how long the chapters are.
I really appreciate and respect the work you pu into them.
I don't know how this story will end, but I hope the events of ths chapter are fixed up in the future.
I kinda feel bad for George, even if I wasn't rooting for him.
1adhdlukeYou have written a pretty damn good story.
So much so that when I'd leave off of a chapter, what would happen next just flooded my mind. I had a hard time thinking because all I could imagine was what might happen next. The story as nearly perfect spelling and grammar, mostly a calm setting, the plot is intriguing, and I absolutely LOVE the characters.
Until the end of chapter 15.
I don't know what the hell happened yet, but so far it seems two completely normal people… ehem…person and pony… just lost their minds. The only semi-logical explanation I can find to this chapter's end is when Cadence used the love spell on the guys that were fighting,it also affected Ron and Peach. Otherwise, I dub them both completely insane.
Just the fact that they disregarded George completely and went straight to bed makes it hard to wrap my mind around it. They weren't even officially dating!
I feel, personally at least, that a part of the story died here with the end of this chapter, at least to me. When I read the part where he "Made love to her for hours" I blinked, stared at it for ten seconds or so, then put my Kindle down.
I didn't sleep very well last night. I still don't fully believe that they would normally, willingly, do that. I will continue reading, but that last part there hurt to read. I'll finish it, assuming the story is finished, though possibly not, seeing how long the chapters are.
I really appreciate and respect the work you pu into them.
I don't know how this story will end, but I hope the events of ths chapter are fixed up in the future.
I kinda feel bad for George, even if I wasn't rooting for him.
9/28/2015 c17 trigrbrony777
No, just when it was finally going well. Now their relationship is suspect to a spell. I'm really worried about Peach, especially if this all was due to Cadance's spell.
Still I really enjoy how you incorporated songs and really brought the nightclub to life.
I'll be honest, I was never one to enjoy the club.
And another great thing was how even you, you manage to incorporate MLP quirks like explaining
words. All of it just seems to make the two worlds interwoven, and all the more fragile, like
their relationship.
Keep up the amazing work! :]
No, just when it was finally going well. Now their relationship is suspect to a spell. I'm really worried about Peach, especially if this all was due to Cadance's spell.
Still I really enjoy how you incorporated songs and really brought the nightclub to life.
I'll be honest, I was never one to enjoy the club.
And another great thing was how even you, you manage to incorporate MLP quirks like explaining
words. All of it just seems to make the two worlds interwoven, and all the more fragile, like
their relationship.
Keep up the amazing work! :]
7/14/2015 c15 trigrbrony777
I am so glad I found this piece. What really catches my attention with this piece is how it carefully considers the potential conflicts and consequences of the existence of such a dimensional connection in a personal narrative. Then again, I am also a sucker for fics that illustrate struggles of having a relationship.
For a second, I thought that this fic wasn't going finish, but I'm glad it's still progressing. I can only worry about how they will interact with each other now. Looking forward to more! :]
-Trigr
I am so glad I found this piece. What really catches my attention with this piece is how it carefully considers the potential conflicts and consequences of the existence of such a dimensional connection in a personal narrative. Then again, I am also a sucker for fics that illustrate struggles of having a relationship.
For a second, I thought that this fic wasn't going finish, but I'm glad it's still progressing. I can only worry about how they will interact with each other now. Looking forward to more! :]
-Trigr
9/14/2014 c10 jc
Any ideas for the new chapter
Any ideas for the new chapter
9/12/2014 c10 16Vuld Edone
I skipped chapter 8 and filled my night with those chapters. Why I like this, probably because it feels "normal". Even though most of the time it's just two characters talking, it's always interesting. wished more HiE were like that.
16Vuld EdoneI skipped chapter 8 and filled my night with those chapters. Why I like this, probably because it feels "normal". Even though most of the time it's just two characters talking, it's always interesting. wished more HiE were like that.
8/28/2014 c10 jc
Cool a new chapter finally good job
Cool a new chapter finally good job
8/23/2014 c9 jc
Hey did you quite
Hey did you quite
8/4/2014 c1 jc
Hey is a new chapter coming
Hey is a new chapter coming
7/11/2014 c9 jc
No super powers no hairem of ponies no cliche main characters no grammar are spelling mistakes I can tell right off. A interesting story, thought provoking, a normal acting person with doubts, I give this over all 8/10 the last two points are on how you end it
No super powers no hairem of ponies no cliche main characters no grammar are spelling mistakes I can tell right off. A interesting story, thought provoking, a normal acting person with doubts, I give this over all 8/10 the last two points are on how you end it
7/9/2014 c9 MorgenSter
I got so scared with the first word in capital, cause I thought it was an announcement of some sort, like "I'm not continuing this". I got so scared I almost screamed. Then I continued and I found out it was not. Oh, God of Books and Stories, thanks. Nice chapter, this seemed more interesting because of the thoughts about Peach that got more... serious, and how about Peach tries to get an answer for everything. Just loving this. Excellent job. PS: The reading part... Oh, I so needed Peach's summaries every now and then. It was a bit hard to understand for me, first time I see that type of writing, but I'm willing to learn it. To Google!
I got so scared with the first word in capital, cause I thought it was an announcement of some sort, like "I'm not continuing this". I got so scared I almost screamed. Then I continued and I found out it was not. Oh, God of Books and Stories, thanks. Nice chapter, this seemed more interesting because of the thoughts about Peach that got more... serious, and how about Peach tries to get an answer for everything. Just loving this. Excellent job. PS: The reading part... Oh, I so needed Peach's summaries every now and then. It was a bit hard to understand for me, first time I see that type of writing, but I'm willing to learn it. To Google!