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for The Eye Mask - A Retelling (Future RWBY AU - COMPLETE ONESHOT)

1/12/2016 c1 EndlessChains
A well done story. The reaction from Ruby finding out she is blind was well done. The transition from sad to happy and vice versa was well done with seeing from both Weiss and Ruby's point of view. It helped tell the story of what happened and how the two got new scars. It was endearing with how Weiss and Ruby interacted with one another to make the other feel better. It was amusing in the end as the atmosphere grew lighter. Thank you. Keep up the good work.
2/22/2015 c1 1Mhuki
Hey, this is nice, - .., uhm, I'm a bit sad over what happened to Ruby, ;-; ..,

I also searched for the images and I found them. They're really well done!
2/19/2014 c1 52Ziirroh
A good blend of melancholy and cheer. Man, when Rubble realized she couldn't see from her right eye it hit my feels pretty good. I just wanted to go hug the two of them, really. Love Rubes' request for a snowflake eyepatch, that was adorbs.
2/12/2014 c1 Jdis
Very good
2/12/2014 c1 1FatelessTranscendent
:) Aww. I love WhiteRose so much!

Loved this, my good man. Now I gotsta look for the original!

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