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for His most loyal soldier

10/19/2016 c2 3Sonic Key
I usually don't like female OCs, because most often they are Mary Sues, but I didn't get that vibe from Susannah. I actually really like her and the idea you've come up with.
Even though this hasn't been updated in a while, I hope you find the time again soon!
6/8/2015 c2 butski
I think this is intriguing and very well written.
I'm looking forward to read more and find out what happens next, so please continue soon.
Thanks for sharing. Take care.
3/18/2014 c2 Cosmic Daeva
Not only is this a better plot than most fan fictions but you write better some native speakers!
3/19/2014 c2 50Maknatuna
Great chapter. The first lines gave me chills.
3/13/2014 c1 Maknatuna
Interesting start. I'll wait for the next chapter to see what's gonna happen :)

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