for The Storm of the Century4/6/2014 c1 E
I really like the story! For this chapter, the only thing I didn't like was the fact that Jack kept calling Elsa "snowflake". I like the whole nickname thing, but he used it in almost every line; like it's to redundant. You feel me? It's a really cute story though :-)
I really like the story! For this chapter, the only thing I didn't like was the fact that Jack kept calling Elsa "snowflake". I like the whole nickname thing, but he used it in almost every line; like it's to redundant. You feel me? It's a really cute story though :-)
2/27/2014 c2 
54Misty Ketchum97
You never said you'd updated this... DX
Anyway, there were several grammar mistakes, such as: No commas, and/or tense changes, but there weren't too, too many.
But you did pretty good. :)
-Misty
54Misty Ketchum97You never said you'd updated this... DX
Anyway, there were several grammar mistakes, such as: No commas, and/or tense changes, but there weren't too, too many.
But you did pretty good. :)
-Misty
2/23/2014 c2 Elsaba
AWWWW! I loved it!
AWWWW! I loved it!
2/13/2014 c1 16princeshadowstar
This was really cute It is good enough to stand alone but I think it'd be great if you actually added another chapter or something, perhaps a confessoin of love for Valentine's? :) Either way, I rally liked this and these two were totally in character. I loved seeing Elsa's childish side, her ability to let go in front of Jack is heartwarming. :) This couple knows how to thaw my frozen heart. haha
16princeshadowstarThis was really cute It is good enough to stand alone but I think it'd be great if you actually added another chapter or something, perhaps a confessoin of love for Valentine's? :) Either way, I rally liked this and these two were totally in character. I loved seeing Elsa's childish side, her ability to let go in front of Jack is heartwarming. :) This couple knows how to thaw my frozen heart. haha
2/13/2014 c1 1Rosepetal33
This is a really good start! I really enjoyed reading it! You have a lovely style of writing. Please update soon!
1Rosepetal33This is a really good start! I really enjoyed reading it! You have a lovely style of writing. Please update soon!
2/13/2014 c1 54Misty Ketchum97
Their argument made me smile. :) This was pretty cute.
Aww, your welcome! Glad I could help.
-Misty
54Misty Ketchum97Their argument made me smile. :) This was pretty cute.
Aww, your welcome! Glad I could help.
-Misty