2/17/2014 c2 BikerSHAM
Hmm, sounds ALOT better with this bit of history you added...
Keep up the GREAT work, and you can UPDATE everyday with this story, /Hint hint...
/Salute, SHAM...8-)
Hmm, sounds ALOT better with this bit of history you added...
Keep up the GREAT work, and you can UPDATE everyday with this story, /Hint hint...
/Salute, SHAM...8-)
2/15/2014 c1 erbkaiser - closed account
You did succeed in me wanting to see more from this fic yes. With just the one chapter it's hard to tell what the premise is but you sketch an interesting world.
You did succeed in me wanting to see more from this fic yes. With just the one chapter it's hard to tell what the premise is but you sketch an interesting world.
2/14/2014 c1 Runecutter
It is interesting, but i feel also a bit cheated by being thrown into the action so suddenly. While the header gives SOME context, it's all a bit vague and I'd have preferred a little bit more of well "hold" onto the basic principles of the story, for example why is Harry only about fifteen? When DID this world shattering event happen? What's up with the light? ;) (okay the last one is obviously meant to frustrate any reader, so it's fair game...)
But the few things one CAN guess from this short intro chapter (e.g. the principle behind this "nightmares") seem nice to try and dial up to eleven, a lot of potential you've got yourself there.
It is interesting, but i feel also a bit cheated by being thrown into the action so suddenly. While the header gives SOME context, it's all a bit vague and I'd have preferred a little bit more of well "hold" onto the basic principles of the story, for example why is Harry only about fifteen? When DID this world shattering event happen? What's up with the light? ;) (okay the last one is obviously meant to frustrate any reader, so it's fair game...)
But the few things one CAN guess from this short intro chapter (e.g. the principle behind this "nightmares") seem nice to try and dial up to eleven, a lot of potential you've got yourself there.
2/14/2014 c1 BikerSHAM
"A Lawyer that knows what a Soul is?" CLASSIC !
Interesting Story... Keep up the Good work, Man.
Glad to see you chained back to your Keyboard...
/Salute, SHAM... 8-)
"A Lawyer that knows what a Soul is?" CLASSIC !
Interesting Story... Keep up the Good work, Man.
Glad to see you chained back to your Keyboard...
/Salute, SHAM... 8-)
2/14/2014 c1 Hugh
hey, great to see you back, i loved runemaster, and am looking forward to this one. the plot sounds reasonable (obviously i dont know the storyline but its got potential) and your writing is (as always) a league above the average composer on here. a short chapter so i dont have much to give you really, just keep em coming. btw you mentioned that you'd completed this, so is this going to be a dump (all teh chapters asap) or a regular update?
hey, great to see you back, i loved runemaster, and am looking forward to this one. the plot sounds reasonable (obviously i dont know the storyline but its got potential) and your writing is (as always) a league above the average composer on here. a short chapter so i dont have much to give you really, just keep em coming. btw you mentioned that you'd completed this, so is this going to be a dump (all teh chapters asap) or a regular update?
2/13/2014 c1 19Simevra Lestrange
Oh, wow! This was so cool xD
Im really happy because this is a completed story!
Oh, wow! This was so cool xD
Im really happy because this is a completed story!