for Sacrifice3/11/2020 c1 
8MaddyBunny10
So sweet! Can't stop crying right now. That's a true story of love and sacrifice.
8MaddyBunny10So sweet! Can't stop crying right now. That's a true story of love and sacrifice.
3/24/2019 c1 Blw
When I read this storie it male cry all the time if you guys feel the same thing I would do the same spend my one last night with the person I love just one last time
When I read this storie it male cry all the time if you guys feel the same thing I would do the same spend my one last night with the person I love just one last time
1/12/2019 c1 2King Shilcow
now that was just lovely. So many emotions in one moment. Makes you think...
2King Shilcownow that was just lovely. So many emotions in one moment. Makes you think...
1/29/2018 c1 24komodor
nice lemon, with semitragic story. it was written in a bit more soft/spiritual way though I preffer the more naturalistic way, but it is totally fine. keep writing, you are doing it good.
24komodornice lemon, with semitragic story. it was written in a bit more soft/spiritual way though I preffer the more naturalistic way, but it is totally fine. keep writing, you are doing it good.
11/21/2017 c1 3ed nerd
i have deep love for everything "Flame"
i have deep love for everything "Flame"
3/12/2016 c1 Guest
Finn and Flame Princess 4ever
Finn and Flame Princess 4ever
11/26/2015 c1 QueenLaraxRoft
What a depressing story I don't watch adventure time anymore so finn and flame princess aren't gonna ve dating anymore and just be friends also awesome story btw
What a depressing story I don't watch adventure time anymore so finn and flame princess aren't gonna ve dating anymore and just be friends also awesome story btw
1/7/2015 c1 HyperFLUFFY
There are honestly A LOT of instances of redundancy. You really should do something about that. Also, your paragraphs are too long. Work on the spacing. But in the end, it seemed really bittersweet. Although I don't get how Finn is still alive and Flame doesn't even try to look for him.
7/10
There are honestly A LOT of instances of redundancy. You really should do something about that. Also, your paragraphs are too long. Work on the spacing. But in the end, it seemed really bittersweet. Although I don't get how Finn is still alive and Flame doesn't even try to look for him.
7/10
9/18/2014 c1 Avid reader
Such a bitter-sweet story. I love it and hate it all at once. I am smiling but feel like crying right now.
Such a bitter-sweet story. I love it and hate it all at once. I am smiling but feel like crying right now.
3/13/2014 c1 TheRealEpicMan
This story is so Amazing. I really wish Flame Princess would go back with him
This story is so Amazing. I really wish Flame Princess would go back with him