2/14/2014 c1 Lionheart
Grr...The one complaint I have about this is the spacing. Seriously, the paragraphs are ridiculously HUGE! I know you can replace chapters so could you honest to god please go edit this and make it more readable!
Grr...The one complaint I have about this is the spacing. Seriously, the paragraphs are ridiculously HUGE! I know you can replace chapters so could you honest to god please go edit this and make it more readable!
2/16/2014 c1 Alpha Wolf 47
-sniff sniff- are u trying to make me cry!? the passion the romance the heartfelt lovelyness i rate this fic as awesomee! i really hope finn and fp get back together soon kinda mad at cinnamon bon after red throne tho but keep up the good work
-sniff sniff- are u trying to make me cry!? the passion the romance the heartfelt lovelyness i rate this fic as awesomee! i really hope finn and fp get back together soon kinda mad at cinnamon bon after red throne tho but keep up the good work
2/16/2014 c1 Broken In7
After Red Throne I can see why you would want to write this. It's a nice story with only one problem. There isn't much verity if you know what I mean, like if that was their only night she should have tried more. Don't want to offend.
After Red Throne I can see why you would want to write this. It's a nice story with only one problem. There isn't much verity if you know what I mean, like if that was their only night she should have tried more. Don't want to offend.
2/14/2014 c1 The Book of Eli
Thank you… *tears of joy* that should have been the heart filled episode of Red Throne thank you. Please write a full fic about FinnxFlame it would be amazing.
Thank you… *tears of joy* that should have been the heart filled episode of Red Throne thank you. Please write a full fic about FinnxFlame it would be amazing.
2/14/2014 c1 Roberto
Great story! Very sweet ending :)
Great story! Very sweet ending :)
2/14/2014 c1 2chistopher
Wow...That was Sweet...
Its just...Just sweet...Not sexy But Sweet
Good Job man
Wow...That was Sweet...
Its just...Just sweet...Not sexy But Sweet
Good Job man
2/14/2014 c1 3nrbuer
this amazing yet really depressing. man what happened to adventure time to make it go all dark and tragic with a heartbroken finn, shady bubblegum who seems to be turning into a villain, and so much more. well at this point I can say hopefully some light sheds on this series and brings it back to it's happy days rather then these tragic ones.
this amazing yet really depressing. man what happened to adventure time to make it go all dark and tragic with a heartbroken finn, shady bubblegum who seems to be turning into a villain, and so much more. well at this point I can say hopefully some light sheds on this series and brings it back to it's happy days rather then these tragic ones.
2/14/2014 c1 SuperNinja94
This is such a beautiful one-shot. I enjoyed reading it, I can't wait to read more from you.
This is such a beautiful one-shot. I enjoyed reading it, I can't wait to read more from you.