for A Foolish Coward and A Tiny Shread of Hope2/15/2014 c1 
5Advazzz
Beautiful! It was so romantic...
I waited to the kiss but it didn't come... Please continue this!
Happy V-day!
5AdvazzzBeautiful! It was so romantic...
I waited to the kiss but it didn't come... Please continue this!
Happy V-day!
2/15/2014 c1 oliya
wow i loved it it was beautiful specially the ending:)
wow i loved it it was beautiful specially the ending:)
2/14/2014 c1 11sass box
This is so cute! I was disappointed when Stella left, and this brought them together beautifully.
11sass boxThis is so cute! I was disappointed when Stella left, and this brought them together beautifully.
2/14/2014 c1 32lily moonlight
Loved it :D I'm happy to ignore Christine :P This was great and really cheered me up, thank you! Please write some more for Mac and Stella soon!
32lily moonlightLoved it :D I'm happy to ignore Christine :P This was great and really cheered me up, thank you! Please write some more for Mac and Stella soon!
2/14/2014 c1 ABVR
Mmmm . . . nicely done. I'm less convinced than you are about Mac-and-Stella as a couple, but I gotta say: Once I grant you the reality of it (which only seems fair, under the circumstances!) you really do make it feel real. Nice job, too, with the whole real/unreal theme at the end . . . Stella feeling like her world was real/complete again when he walks in.
Favorite bit:
M: "I need you."
S: "No you don't."
[Me: "Um . . . Stella? His last sentence doesn't mean what you think it means . . ."]
Mmmm . . . nicely done. I'm less convinced than you are about Mac-and-Stella as a couple, but I gotta say: Once I grant you the reality of it (which only seems fair, under the circumstances!) you really do make it feel real. Nice job, too, with the whole real/unreal theme at the end . . . Stella feeling like her world was real/complete again when he walks in.
Favorite bit:
M: "I need you."
S: "No you don't."
[Me: "Um . . . Stella? His last sentence doesn't mean what you think it means . . ."]