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5/18/2017 c5 Guest
Hmm, it's an interesting story but you have written Elizabeth as far too OOC.

Her blaming Darcy entirely for the insult to Charlotte, when quite clearly it was her mother at fault; Elizabeth wouldn't have been blind to it and whilst she might be angry at him, she would place the majority of the blame on her mother and also be embarrassed about her behaviour.

And Elizabeth definitely would not declare that the Bible is her favourite book!
9/11/2016 c5 Brokenwings35
Great chapter.
9/11/2016 c3 Brokenwings35
I loved the chapter.
5/14/2015 c2 1nanciellen
Another great chapter. Wickham shows up first in this story. Already suspect. Thank you.
5/13/2015 c1 nanciellen
Very good chapter. I am enjoying it. Rose is a little like Fanny from Mansfield Park. Thank you.
4/28/2015 c5 Guest
Shame you haven't continued with this, although you have written Elizabeth as rather immature and OOC on the whole.
2/4/2015 c5 ingjerd96
Love the story! And I hope you will come with a new update soon!
1/21/2015 c5 Happywife
I just caught up on this latest chapter. I love the E/D/Colonel F conversation. I wonder if Mrs B or anyone else noticed the conversation or goodbye? And I wonder what E is thinking now. I saw Colonel F's slight reference to needing to marry money, but it wasn't clear if E picked up on that, or if she would mention it if anyone asked her about the possibility of a relationship with him. Great update!
11/20/2014 c1 Guest
Misplaced modifiers can be amazingly amusing. I love that Mr. Darcy was inappropriately eyed by Mrs. Darcy's rude companion. To avoid confusion, you might want to reword your sentence to say, "the husband of the woman he'd been inappropriately eyeing."
10/31/2014 c5 Babe Pryor
have little hope of this being completed or updated, I DO enjoy it. I hope all is well with you and yours.
10/31/2014 c2 Babe Pryor
I'm waaay more interested in the viscount. And Lizzy marrying him,then killing same...xx
10/6/2014 c5 1A-Novel-on-a-Whim
I'm really enjoying this, love the odd relationships occurring in this. Please update soon!
9/27/2014 c5 Stingette
When Elizabeth contemplates the gentlemen, you have her mention Wickham instead of the Viscount.
9/27/2014 c5 Kary Bobbins
Well, I have a lot of questions XD like, how in the world Lizzie ended married with the Viscount? they hadn't interacted so much... or maybe the actual Viscount died and the title passed to the Col. And he was the one she married? And then he died too and she marries Darcy? Lol that's a lot of murders I have made XD I don't know but I'm eager to know.

And how is that Wickham is in Hertfordshire with the Militia? Isn't he suposed to be in Pemberley? and why is he part of the militia if he's still with the Darcys?...

And me, like Rose are wondering, why was Mrs . Darcy acting so cold towards her husband?... XD
9/25/2014 c5 Keg
So glad to have found your story again! I read the intriguing prologue some time ago, but never saw the subsequent chapters until now.

I really like the premise. The addition of Mrs. Wickham influencing matters, and her son still welcome at Pemberley adds a whole new twist to things. I shall be very curious how the colonel's influence might assist Darcy in digging himself out of the unfavorable hole he has dug for himself. There is some work to be done there.

Do you have a posting schedule? I'm enjoying the well crafted, lengthy chapters and am greedy for more ;)

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