for The Musical Maelstrom1/7/2018 c15 Guest
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10/2/2016 c9 
9Firefly9202002
Breast? Really? You know their is something called proofreading and spell check. Also how does shooting an arrow at Kyubi seal it in Naruto?
9Firefly9202002Breast? Really? You know their is something called proofreading and spell check. Also how does shooting an arrow at Kyubi seal it in Naruto?
5/19/2014 c24 Guest
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4/29/2014 c23 mr grimjaw
this is mh at best the only thing that truned me off is the fact Naruto is not dead that you broke the rule of Tailed Beasts being taken out the host dies and thats seat in stone wich it cant be chagned
this is mh at best the only thing that truned me off is the fact Naruto is not dead that you broke the rule of Tailed Beasts being taken out the host dies and thats seat in stone wich it cant be chagned
4/26/2014 c1 Guest
24 chapters for only 18,000 words? Dude, these chapters are so short that it's kind of sad.
24 chapters for only 18,000 words? Dude, these chapters are so short that it's kind of sad.
4/26/2014 c14 Guest
This is so terribly written...
This is so terribly written...
3/21/2014 c15 mr grimjaw
this is good but you have misspelled Hanabi's name i thank you got Hanabi and hebi confused hebi is sauske's team
this is good but you have misspelled Hanabi's name i thank you got Hanabi and hebi confused hebi is sauske's team