for The King of the Dragon Slayers5/17/2022 c10 
3musashi566
Romeo is at best A class. He can beat Erigor. But you're saying Natsu who can take on four mages, two of which are S class (he's also tied with Gildarts) has to sit out for the fight because he was exhausted from dispelling Erigor's wind barrier? Your power levels make no sense. He's tired from one secret art spell... The entire fight he casted one regular spell and one secret art spell. How the fuck is he even an S class? He's useless after one big spell. You're trying way too hard to fit in an OP char into canon plot. Either deviate from canon or leave him out of the arc. There's a reason why FT author avoided putting Gildarts in any of the major fights because it would render the other characters moot. No character progression. You can't stick him with the regular cast and canon story arc and expect things to go well, unless you make the enemies a lot more powerful. Right now Natsu Gildarts Laxus Mira/Erza Romeo/Gray Erigor (see the problem? A single barrier spell puts Natsu out of the fight)
3musashi566Romeo is at best A class. He can beat Erigor. But you're saying Natsu who can take on four mages, two of which are S class (he's also tied with Gildarts) has to sit out for the fight because he was exhausted from dispelling Erigor's wind barrier? Your power levels make no sense. He's tired from one secret art spell... The entire fight he casted one regular spell and one secret art spell. How the fuck is he even an S class? He's useless after one big spell. You're trying way too hard to fit in an OP char into canon plot. Either deviate from canon or leave him out of the arc. There's a reason why FT author avoided putting Gildarts in any of the major fights because it would render the other characters moot. No character progression. You can't stick him with the regular cast and canon story arc and expect things to go well, unless you make the enemies a lot more powerful. Right now Natsu Gildarts Laxus Mira/Erza Romeo/Gray Erigor (see the problem? A single barrier spell puts Natsu out of the fight)
2/7/2020 c36 Guest
Why
isn't finished
Why
isn't finished
8/25/2018 c36 Frwt
wahhh...
finally... some romance between natsu and erza...
i hope so...
really... thi is awesome story
wahhh...
finally... some romance between natsu and erza...
i hope so...
really... thi is awesome story
6/26/2018 c1 9EmperorRevan
Terrible pacing. Nothing makes sense. Natsu is crying, Acnologia threatens to eat him, then offers to take him in out of no where, then Natsu goes thank you for getting a home? Dude this is a poor mans version of Eye of the Black Dragon.
9EmperorRevanTerrible pacing. Nothing makes sense. Natsu is crying, Acnologia threatens to eat him, then offers to take him in out of no where, then Natsu goes thank you for getting a home? Dude this is a poor mans version of Eye of the Black Dragon.
3/2/2018 c5 Guest
Oh, the puns just keep on coming!
Oh, the puns just keep on coming!
10/12/2017 c17 15the real narnia
But... You mentioned Lisanna earlier in the story? Didn't she take Mira's place as a barmaid
15the real narniaBut... You mentioned Lisanna earlier in the story? Didn't she take Mira's place as a barmaid
7/19/2017 c2 Guest
Low key I eat a lot of ass and personally I love it but not as much as I like this story
Low key I eat a lot of ass and personally I love it but not as much as I like this story
1/1/2017 c10 Manosikvabe-Mrito
Why couldn't he natsu fight kagemaya or that and take that fluite from he couldn't use teleportation to go outside from the wind barrier.? I think the people who praise your story are either kid or dumb.i am dropping this
Why couldn't he natsu fight kagemaya or that and take that fluite from he couldn't use teleportation to go outside from the wind barrier.? I think the people who praise your story are either kid or dumb.i am dropping this
1/1/2017 c7 Manosikvabe-Mrito
When natsu can do many s class mission solo but need assistance in lulaby mission which canon natsu completed with still needs assistance so that syory can follow the canon arc badly.
When natsu can do many s class mission solo but need assistance in lulaby mission which canon natsu completed with still needs assistance so that syory can follow the canon arc badly.
10/15/2016 c37 Guest
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KILL ME NOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW NOT THE STORY NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ ILL SACRIFICE MYSELF FOR THE LIFE OF THIS STORY :(
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KILL ME NOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW NOT THE STORY NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ ILL SACRIFICE MYSELF FOR THE LIFE OF THIS STORY :(
9/2/2016 c1 Guest
Wanna be writer get a life.
Wanna be writer get a life.
6/6/2016 c23 Guest
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3/28/2016 c5 Rushed
Lucy joining fairy tail isn't that great .-.
Lucy joining fairy tail isn't that great .-.