for Daniel, My Brother2/21/2020 c1 Suzy Q1068
Nooo! Too sad! No more dead or crippled children. Tim's childhood was tough enough. Poor Timmy. Dad just had to add guilt to the mix. He was just a little boy too.
Nooo! Too sad! No more dead or crippled children. Tim's childhood was tough enough. Poor Timmy. Dad just had to add guilt to the mix. He was just a little boy too.
2/18/2014 c1 Savannahstar
Intense. Update soon I hope:)
Intense. Update soon I hope:)
2/15/2014 c1 gibbsgirl
The scream was haunting. Very well played and intense. Gibbs to the rescue.
The scream was haunting. Very well played and intense. Gibbs to the rescue.
2/16/2014 c1 
51briwd
You've written a sad and bittersweet story giving an important slice of backstory on McGee. This makes more sense than what the show has given us. Good job!
51briwdYou've written a sad and bittersweet story giving an important slice of backstory on McGee. This makes more sense than what the show has given us. Good job!