for Unlikely Lovers6/8/2015 c2 h-k
Give me the story I will improve the story
Give me the story I will improve the story
3/5/2014 c2 
2Melodious LoneWolf22
I'd think I'd like to take your offer on "Unlikely Lovers" I really liked the first chapter and I was thinking that maybe you want to stay in touch with me so we could finish this story together. I like how you put songs into it, I was debating on doing that in my stories but I didn't think people would like it. Please don't log off now, man, you're re a pretty good author and you were one of the first guys to really like my story Regret, so I'd like to work with you. I hope you could PM me man, see you in the Ink! :) Keep posting man.
2Melodious LoneWolf22I'd think I'd like to take your offer on "Unlikely Lovers" I really liked the first chapter and I was thinking that maybe you want to stay in touch with me so we could finish this story together. I like how you put songs into it, I was debating on doing that in my stories but I didn't think people would like it. Please don't log off now, man, you're re a pretty good author and you were one of the first guys to really like my story Regret, so I'd like to work with you. I hope you could PM me man, see you in the Ink! :) Keep posting man.
3/5/2014 c2 1KingAzxoll9
I could not write this story with nearly as much ability as you have. One, because you possess more author skill than I. Two, because I lack experience in the passionate relationship area. My main character is a loner...he who hath had no good life relations. I write from this POV with experience, meaning I could not successfully depict a loving embrace. I would love to see this go onward though...and I'll be sure to follow this story with whoever takes it
1KingAzxoll9I could not write this story with nearly as much ability as you have. One, because you possess more author skill than I. Two, because I lack experience in the passionate relationship area. My main character is a loner...he who hath had no good life relations. I write from this POV with experience, meaning I could not successfully depict a loving embrace. I would love to see this go onward though...and I'll be sure to follow this story with whoever takes it
3/4/2014 c1 lillysdreamer
I definitely think you should make this into a story it shounds like it has a lot of potential
I definitely think you should make this into a story it shounds like it has a lot of potential
2/16/2014 c1 4MotherTrucker4x4
Damn it! I was gonna write something like this! But I guess you beat me to it. Well done.
4MotherTrucker4x4Damn it! I was gonna write something like this! But I guess you beat me to it. Well done.
2/16/2014 c1 the dark shadow
Love it
Love it
2/16/2014 c1 8xXShadowTheWolfXx
nice one shot this could actually be turned into a story though (is that what you're planning to do?)
8xXShadowTheWolfXxnice one shot this could actually be turned into a story though (is that what you're planning to do?)
2/15/2014 c1 1KingAzxoll9
Oh bam! You got Sweets here, one of the lesser-known characters becoming Humphreys true soulmate. Great way to end it, my friend. I really hope you return to fanfiction one day, your mind reloaded and ready to reappease your public! Long live Mr. Steal Yo Gurl!
1KingAzxoll9Oh bam! You got Sweets here, one of the lesser-known characters becoming Humphreys true soulmate. Great way to end it, my friend. I really hope you return to fanfiction one day, your mind reloaded and ready to reappease your public! Long live Mr. Steal Yo Gurl!