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6/8/2015 c2 h-k
Give me the story I will improve the story
3/5/2014 c2 2Melodious LoneWolf22
I'd think I'd like to take your offer on "Unlikely Lovers" I really liked the first chapter and I was thinking that maybe you want to stay in touch with me so we could finish this story together. I like how you put songs into it, I was debating on doing that in my stories but I didn't think people would like it. Please don't log off now, man, you're re a pretty good author and you were one of the first guys to really like my story Regret, so I'd like to work with you. I hope you could PM me man, see you in the Ink! :) Keep posting man.
3/5/2014 c2 1KingAzxoll9
I could not write this story with nearly as much ability as you have. One, because you possess more author skill than I. Two, because I lack experience in the passionate relationship area. My main character is a loner...he who hath had no good life relations. I write from this POV with experience, meaning I could not successfully depict a loving embrace. I would love to see this go onward though...and I'll be sure to follow this story with whoever takes it
3/4/2014 c1 lillysdreamer
I definitely think you should make this into a story it shounds like it has a lot of potential
2/16/2014 c1 8beastlyhutch
Amazing story and please don't leave I live your story's
2/16/2014 c1 71dax0042
Wow, Good song.
2/16/2014 c1 4MotherTrucker4x4
Damn it! I was gonna write something like this! But I guess you beat me to it. Well done.
2/16/2014 c1 the dark shadow
Love it
2/16/2014 c1 8xXShadowTheWolfXx
nice one shot this could actually be turned into a story though (is that what you're planning to do?)
2/15/2014 c1 1KingAzxoll9
Oh bam! You got Sweets here, one of the lesser-known characters becoming Humphreys true soulmate. Great way to end it, my friend. I really hope you return to fanfiction one day, your mind reloaded and ready to reappease your public! Long live Mr. Steal Yo Gurl!

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