for City of Silence2/28/2014 c1 Guest
I really do like this story! Keep it up
I really do like this story! Keep it up
2/28/2014 c2 greygirl2358
I really like this version of Valentine. He's kind to her and loves her very much. I really don't want that to change.
Jonathan a pervo? Who knew? JK! Pretty much figured that out.
Very glad you've updated! :)
I really like this version of Valentine. He's kind to her and loves her very much. I really don't want that to change.
Jonathan a pervo? Who knew? JK! Pretty much figured that out.
Very glad you've updated! :)
2/28/2014 c2 Guest
I love father and daughter bonding in this story. Will valentine always be there for her?
I love father and daughter bonding in this story. Will valentine always be there for her?
2/24/2014 c1 
1AnnaW14
This is an interesting start! I hope you keep it up! Will Jonathan/Sebastian be her brother or Jace?
1AnnaW14This is an interesting start! I hope you keep it up! Will Jonathan/Sebastian be her brother or Jace?
2/16/2014 c1 greygirl2358
Me again! It sounds like Clary is the little girl. Jocelyn is the woman who was killed. And Valentine is the killer. He is obviously looking for the cup. That's what he meant when he said "she took something from me". That's how the story rolls. And the 'threatening' brother is none other than Jonathan. But the fact that Valentine is patient with her shocks me. I think he caught on to the fact that she's in shock and can't really say much. It sounds as if he's going to be good to her. Which is very unlike Valentine and is why I usually refer to him as Valenslime. Yep! I'm hooked!
Me again! It sounds like Clary is the little girl. Jocelyn is the woman who was killed. And Valentine is the killer. He is obviously looking for the cup. That's what he meant when he said "she took something from me". That's how the story rolls. And the 'threatening' brother is none other than Jonathan. But the fact that Valentine is patient with her shocks me. I think he caught on to the fact that she's in shock and can't really say much. It sounds as if he's going to be good to her. Which is very unlike Valentine and is why I usually refer to him as Valenslime. Yep! I'm hooked!
2/16/2014 c1 Guest
I want to say Clary, Valentine, and Jocelyn, but your AN makes me think otherwise... Isabelle maybe?
I want to say Clary, Valentine, and Jocelyn, but your AN makes me think otherwise... Isabelle maybe?
2/16/2014 c1 greygirl2358
I like this beginning a lot. It's very different. I would love to read more of this, so please update soon.
I like this beginning a lot. It's very different. I would love to read more of this, so please update soon.
2/16/2014 c1 2MikiEatonCullenHerondale
I think this is a really good story but I was a little confused as to who is who. I'm assuming the little girl is Clary, the dead women is Jocelyn and the man Valentine. Not sure as to why Clary would not know her own name though. I encourage you to continue and will follow through on the pestering! :)
2MikiEatonCullenHerondaleI think this is a really good story but I was a little confused as to who is who. I'm assuming the little girl is Clary, the dead women is Jocelyn and the man Valentine. Not sure as to why Clary would not know her own name though. I encourage you to continue and will follow through on the pestering! :)