for What We Could've Been2/22/2014 c1 Ramyfan
Dramione cliché I can't stand:
I normally never read anything that is written on someones profile but I totally agree with what you wrote it annoys me that they potray hermione as a plain girl who no one wants and they often write how ugly and unfitting her clothes are... I always think if the writer ever watched the movie, they were very fitting and nice... And now to your story it was a great start and thank you forw writing that ron and hermiones relationship didnt last because they wanted different things... I am so glad that you pointed that out and I do hope hermione finds someone who is good looking and I hope she really likes him so draco can have some serious competition maybe oliver wood? And thank you for writing that draco is not the most handsome guy in the world :) really draco is hot but there are other guys who are way hotter than him... I think you are the first dramione writer to ever write that... And do continue with your story I feel like I am going to lve your story because of the way you think of dramione
Dramione cliché I can't stand:
I normally never read anything that is written on someones profile but I totally agree with what you wrote it annoys me that they potray hermione as a plain girl who no one wants and they often write how ugly and unfitting her clothes are... I always think if the writer ever watched the movie, they were very fitting and nice... And now to your story it was a great start and thank you forw writing that ron and hermiones relationship didnt last because they wanted different things... I am so glad that you pointed that out and I do hope hermione finds someone who is good looking and I hope she really likes him so draco can have some serious competition maybe oliver wood? And thank you for writing that draco is not the most handsome guy in the world :) really draco is hot but there are other guys who are way hotter than him... I think you are the first dramione writer to ever write that... And do continue with your story I feel like I am going to lve your story because of the way you think of dramione
2/17/2014 c1 Erica
I usually enjoy stories with hermione and Draco working as partners and I hope this one is no different. I enjoyed the beginning and it looks like it will only become more interesting. One critique...you need a beta or proofreader. There were quite a few mistakes but they can be easily fixed. Good luck.
I usually enjoy stories with hermione and Draco working as partners and I hope this one is no different. I enjoyed the beginning and it looks like it will only become more interesting. One critique...you need a beta or proofreader. There were quite a few mistakes but they can be easily fixed. Good luck.
2/17/2014 c1 
27Drumboy100
Cool idea for a couple. Draco and Hermione are both strong, action-oriented individuals, so I can see how they might have worked. If not for the punch, Hermione! :)
27Drumboy100Cool idea for a couple. Draco and Hermione are both strong, action-oriented individuals, so I can see how they might have worked. If not for the punch, Hermione! :)