
2/17/2014 c1 Guest
This...
This is actually pretty good. Pretty... Pretty good. Not much I can say. Grammar and spelling seem good. Characterization seems good. Setting seems good, but the overall plot feels kind of contrived to me. Not that it really matters much, but still...
Just continue forward.
This...
This is actually pretty good. Pretty... Pretty good. Not much I can say. Grammar and spelling seem good. Characterization seems good. Setting seems good, but the overall plot feels kind of contrived to me. Not that it really matters much, but still...
Just continue forward.
2/17/2014 c1 enderverse
This is fun, Peter is the best sociopath. I liked the dynamic with his sister though, is that going to be emulated.
This is fun, Peter is the best sociopath. I liked the dynamic with his sister though, is that going to be emulated.