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for The Chosen Ones and the Path Of Truth- Book I: The Return To Tatooine

3/13/2014 c3 4fantasyfan1764
still going good but can you please separate scenes a bit better perhaps like this

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3/13/2014 c2 fantasyfan1764
good story man but remember Disney bought the rights for star wars so might want to change that disclaimer when post new chapter :)
2/24/2014 c4 paladin3030
And AWAAAAAAY we go!
2/21/2014 c2 paladin3030
I have a feeling that with SG1 there Shmi will live long enuf to see her grandkids.
2/21/2014 c2 1great northern one
need to separate responsive chat to spate lines, its really hard to read when different people are speaking on the same line
2/19/2014 c1 paladin3030
Oops looks like you posted this story in the Satargate SG1 section & not the Power Ranger section.
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