for Zombie's in the Dying Flesh12/15/2019 c23 Hovnivl
God, I want to enjoy the fic, but there are so MANY grammar mistakes... My eyes can't bear with it. And the Czech? It's all wrong! And people don't speak Czech in Austria. They speak German there.
Sorry, maybe if you rewrite the grammar stuff, the fic will be awesome. I really like the story, but it' hard to read it for me. Have you considered finding a beta? They might help you with those mistakes and you kight learn a thing or two. :)
God, I want to enjoy the fic, but there are so MANY grammar mistakes... My eyes can't bear with it. And the Czech? It's all wrong! And people don't speak Czech in Austria. They speak German there.
Sorry, maybe if you rewrite the grammar stuff, the fic will be awesome. I really like the story, but it' hard to read it for me. Have you considered finding a beta? They might help you with those mistakes and you kight learn a thing or two. :)
12/12/2014 c28 Sylvyr Rose
Well, read BOTH endings and they were interesting. Because "the failure" had told Robin he could make wings appear, why didn't Robin just do that and fly them away? Sure, it'd extend the story, but it would make sense. Lol. Another thing, I trained in the medical field and believe I remember CPR being 30 compressions to 2 breaths of air. CPR being only used when no pulse is found. If a pulse is found, breaths are provided if not breathing. But it's alright. :) I'm just the picky reader because I know what I know. ;) Good job though!
Well, read BOTH endings and they were interesting. Because "the failure" had told Robin he could make wings appear, why didn't Robin just do that and fly them away? Sure, it'd extend the story, but it would make sense. Lol. Another thing, I trained in the medical field and believe I remember CPR being 30 compressions to 2 breaths of air. CPR being only used when no pulse is found. If a pulse is found, breaths are provided if not breathing. But it's alright. :) I'm just the picky reader because I know what I know. ;) Good job though!
12/9/2014 c2 Sylvyr Rose
Sooo... This is really great so far and all, and it got me thinking about zombifying other genres too, but my brain is so in on Z Nation, that I don't think I'd be able to write something serious. Lmao. Anyway, I hope this goes well. I'll probably read more, but it's a little hard for me to read at the moment because it's so... jumpy? It's fast paced, in my opinion. But good luck! I'll review here and there to tell you what I'm thinking. And I'll keep reading, slowly. Lol. Thank you for the Zombie Apocalypse rendition of Teen Titans!
Sooo... This is really great so far and all, and it got me thinking about zombifying other genres too, but my brain is so in on Z Nation, that I don't think I'd be able to write something serious. Lmao. Anyway, I hope this goes well. I'll probably read more, but it's a little hard for me to read at the moment because it's so... jumpy? It's fast paced, in my opinion. But good luck! I'll review here and there to tell you what I'm thinking. And I'll keep reading, slowly. Lol. Thank you for the Zombie Apocalypse rendition of Teen Titans!
8/27/2014 c28 
3readthishit
yeah, definately dark, but lighter! I personally like this ending better, but for a zombie fic, I feel the darker ending is better suited for this story.
3readthishityeah, definately dark, but lighter! I personally like this ending better, but for a zombie fic, I feel the darker ending is better suited for this story.
8/21/2014 c26 3readthishit
"In the Role Play"
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as soon as i read it i knew it was gonna be good! :3
3readthishit"In the Role Play"
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as soon as i read it i knew it was gonna be good! :3
8/20/2014 c26 2neonslushie
A million snacks for you num! And I'm not trying to sound stalker-ish but do you have a YouTube, Instagram etc? You don't have to answer tht lol but great chappie!
2neonslushieA million snacks for you num! And I'm not trying to sound stalker-ish but do you have a YouTube, Instagram etc? You don't have to answer tht lol but great chappie!
8/6/2014 c25 Aguna
Great chapter and happy holiday :)
Great chapter and happy holiday :)
7/31/2014 c24 3readthishit
so is it bad that i really want beef stew now...?
Yay no charecter death this time! but i almost had a heart attack when robin walked throught that window!
3readthishitso is it bad that i really want beef stew now...?
Yay no charecter death this time! but i almost had a heart attack when robin walked throught that window!