for Fly Away11/11/2014 c4 
9fanficforyou
Augustus' character was spot on in this chapter!
loved how you wrote your own scene as well - would love to see more of these as well
cant wait for more :)
9fanficforyouAugustus' character was spot on in this chapter!
loved how you wrote your own scene as well - would love to see more of these as well
cant wait for more :)
11/11/2014 c4 1splinterson77
this wassoooo good! loved that idea! u should definitely do some of ur own scenes as well!:)
1splinterson77this wassoooo good! loved that idea! u should definitely do some of ur own scenes as well!:)
8/10/2014 c2 6rainbowchameleon
I am loving this. You capture Augustus' personality really well, keep going!
6rainbowchameleonI am loving this. You capture Augustus' personality really well, keep going!
8/9/2014 c3 9fanficforyou
I love the story so far
Gus' character is well-written
maybe you could just not copy out the dialogue and just refer to it and write more of your own ideas
can't wait for the next chapter
9fanficforyouI love the story so far
Gus' character is well-written
maybe you could just not copy out the dialogue and just refer to it and write more of your own ideas
can't wait for the next chapter
7/24/2014 c2 48AnamariaJovel
OMG I CANNOT WAIT FOR THIS UPDATE! I LOVE THIS, AND YOU ARE THE MOST AMAZING WRITER EVER! YOU PERFECTLY CAPTURED AUGUSTUS' ATTITUDE AND AMAZING THOUGHT PROCESS!
48AnamariaJovelOMG I CANNOT WAIT FOR THIS UPDATE! I LOVE THIS, AND YOU ARE THE MOST AMAZING WRITER EVER! YOU PERFECTLY CAPTURED AUGUSTUS' ATTITUDE AND AMAZING THOUGHT PROCESS!
6/18/2014 c2 Wendowall
OH MY GOD I LOVED IT LOVE IT! I have re read TFIOS a million times, its nice to read it from Augustus' POV! And you are an awesome writer!
OH MY GOD I LOVED IT LOVE IT! I have re read TFIOS a million times, its nice to read it from Augustus' POV! And you are an awesome writer!
6/11/2014 c2 Guest
Please please please update! I love this! U are doing a great job with his pov and I think u should reeeeeaaaalllyy continue
Please please please update! I love this! U are doing a great job with his pov and I think u should reeeeeaaaalllyy continue
6/8/2014 c1 Guest
I love this, and I'd love if you continued
I love this, and I'd love if you continued
6/8/2014 c2 Annai
Plz continue!
Plz continue!
6/7/2014 c2 Dylannn
Uh, so if you were to continue, would it be like a direct copy of the book except in his view or would you tweak it a little or just completely rewrite it? Just curious. I cried a few times reading the first chapter from memories but it was amazing ;-; Thank you for writing this! c:
Uh, so if you were to continue, would it be like a direct copy of the book except in his view or would you tweak it a little or just completely rewrite it? Just curious. I cried a few times reading the first chapter from memories but it was amazing ;-; Thank you for writing this! c: