for Denial6/2/2014 c1 Blu Taiger
This was a charming and well written little story, here.
You did make one tiny little mistake, though. Susie's hair is brunette, not blonde. Otherwise, well done.
This was a charming and well written little story, here.
You did make one tiny little mistake, though. Susie's hair is brunette, not blonde. Otherwise, well done.
2/25/2014 c1 
6FreakingCrazy
Really nice. I think of all the ways that strip in particular could be explained and/or expanded, this is by far the best. Denial is a curse and a blessing, although its meaning changes depending on how you deal with it. Poor Calvin, nothing really goes his way, does it?
6FreakingCrazyReally nice. I think of all the ways that strip in particular could be explained and/or expanded, this is by far the best. Denial is a curse and a blessing, although its meaning changes depending on how you deal with it. Poor Calvin, nothing really goes his way, does it?