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2/22/2014 c1 Jo
You are right! There aren't enough swanfire stories! Thank you for writing one , it was really good :)
2/22/2014 c1 22Meresger
If only...
2/21/2014 c1 5HarrylovesGinny09
Yes. We do need more Emma Neal story
2/21/2014 c1 181Snapegirlkmf
Aww that was sweet! And Swanfire's not dead, I write it too. See my fic Send Her My Love and The Gold Standard for them! I love them and hope they keep them together on the show!
2/21/2014 c1 maressaonce
Thank you so so much for writing this. I have to agree with you there aren't enough SwanFire FF out there. I was hoping this would turn out as a multiple chapter story… :)
2/21/2014 c1 ZieraZ117
Interesting! I liked it. I like that it wasn't all sunshine and lollypops- but it was a lot of pain, hurt, and comfort. I also like the hook/neal bromanship. ;) Though something that would definitely help with the flow of the story, if I may suggest, would be putting punctuation at the end of someone's dialogue.

Instead of this,

"Obviously not, that was a bonehead move on your part don't you think"

"What can I say I was driven by love"

Try this:

"Obviously not, that was a bonehead move on your part, don't you think?"

"What can I say, I was driven by love."

That just makes it easier to read in general. :)

But other than that, the story was really good. Characters were in character and yeah. Thanks for posting :)

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