
10/22/2014 c1
11shadowkat678
That writing isn't half bad, though you may want to work on characterization a bit so they'll seem more three dimensional. And I don't think Hermione would have called him a mudblood the first five minutes in the room, maybe after a week or two if he started to bug her, but if she'd never said it before it would probably have taken longer.

That writing isn't half bad, though you may want to work on characterization a bit so they'll seem more three dimensional. And I don't think Hermione would have called him a mudblood the first five minutes in the room, maybe after a week or two if he started to bug her, but if she'd never said it before it would probably have taken longer.
2/21/2014 c1
19Simevra Lestrange
Oh god! This was so sweet! :D It actually made me say "Aww" a dozen times! :D well done!

Oh god! This was so sweet! :D It actually made me say "Aww" a dozen times! :D well done!