for A Peal of Thunder9/7/2019 c6 
12Danen5
not how i would have gone about doing the guy with storm powers, but its interesting nonetheless. i like it. also is it weird that I had an almost identical start as you did. with storm boy using his power to bring down the king and queen of arendelles ship. though in my version the storm kid was a teen same as elsa and had used his powers to eliminate all of his political enemies, some of whom had a hand in his parents murder, which set off his storm call, and whose powers were so strong that it affected the entire planet forming storms everywhere including the sea where the arendelle ship sank. so my storm guy was indirectly responsible for the death of arendelles king and queen. yours seems to be directly responsible, through coercion, and unable to accept his powers. my storm prince guy accpted his and is the antagonist where elsa and other girls with powers form an alliance to stop his conquest of the world. anyways that was the idea, haven't gotten around to doing it but maybe later, or if anyone is interested in adopting the idea go ahead, even you dear author, just let your imagination run wild...i do appreciate it tho if you PM me first about taking on the idea if anyone wants to do that is, so i don't write it and then get banned for plagiarism...or is my version of the storm princey already considered a plagiarism? great story tho, i love it.
12Danen5not how i would have gone about doing the guy with storm powers, but its interesting nonetheless. i like it. also is it weird that I had an almost identical start as you did. with storm boy using his power to bring down the king and queen of arendelles ship. though in my version the storm kid was a teen same as elsa and had used his powers to eliminate all of his political enemies, some of whom had a hand in his parents murder, which set off his storm call, and whose powers were so strong that it affected the entire planet forming storms everywhere including the sea where the arendelle ship sank. so my storm guy was indirectly responsible for the death of arendelles king and queen. yours seems to be directly responsible, through coercion, and unable to accept his powers. my storm prince guy accpted his and is the antagonist where elsa and other girls with powers form an alliance to stop his conquest of the world. anyways that was the idea, haven't gotten around to doing it but maybe later, or if anyone is interested in adopting the idea go ahead, even you dear author, just let your imagination run wild...i do appreciate it tho if you PM me first about taking on the idea if anyone wants to do that is, so i don't write it and then get banned for plagiarism...or is my version of the storm princey already considered a plagiarism? great story tho, i love it.
3/14/2015 c5 6jaffa3
Oh Elsa she just set herself up to be made fun of. "When we're alone."
Anyway great chapter.
6jaffa3Oh Elsa she just set herself up to be made fun of. "When we're alone."
Anyway great chapter.
3/13/2015 c3 jaffa3
Elsa telling Olaf to put the hat and cane back was cute. Good story so far, I'm really enjoying it.
Elsa telling Olaf to put the hat and cane back was cute. Good story so far, I'm really enjoying it.
3/13/2015 c50 BrutusPrimus
I don't know why, but I had a haunting suspicion Werewolves were gonna be added to the story. Nice.
I don't know why, but I had a haunting suspicion Werewolves were gonna be added to the story. Nice.
3/12/2015 c1 1awcodcoolfan
Shut...up! Nice plot you have here! I really want more of your story. Definitely my first favorite story in the frozen fanfiction!
1awcodcoolfanShut...up! Nice plot you have here! I really want more of your story. Definitely my first favorite story in the frozen fanfiction!
6/19/2014 c44 2Volchise
I love this story and this chapter. I'm glad Anna came around and that Don isn't really a bad guy. I especially liked how you painted he and Elsa being received by the people at the beginning.
2VolchiseI love this story and this chapter. I'm glad Anna came around and that Don isn't really a bad guy. I especially liked how you painted he and Elsa being received by the people at the beginning.
5/26/2014 c43 Volchise
Yaaaay! Excited! Though I do hope that everyone gets their heads out of their asses because Don killed people. If he didn't everyone would be dead.
Yaaaay! Excited! Though I do hope that everyone gets their heads out of their asses because Don killed people. If he didn't everyone would be dead.
5/22/2014 c41 Person of no interest
Most people seem to be getting bad vibes from
Don. I'm willing to give him the benefit of the doubt,but it wouldn't surprise me if his actions are somehow the cause of the coming would cool if Anna and Kristoff had twins with powers :)
Most people seem to be getting bad vibes from
Don. I'm willing to give him the benefit of the doubt,but it wouldn't surprise me if his actions are somehow the cause of the coming would cool if Anna and Kristoff had twins with powers :)
4/27/2014 c39 4MegAnimefreakx3
I got to say , I really enjoy you making not just your oc but the characters from frozen MORE HUMAN. (not that i am saying that the writers did a bad job with the characters from the movie but this fanfic have more real than the disney feeling that they have in the movie) Keep up the good work :3
4MegAnimefreakx3I got to say , I really enjoy you making not just your oc but the characters from frozen MORE HUMAN. (not that i am saying that the writers did a bad job with the characters from the movie but this fanfic have more real than the disney feeling that they have in the movie) Keep up the good work :3
4/24/2014 c38 Guest
this is really a good story )
this is really a good story )
4/21/2014 c38 Vanessa
What a dragon! I hope it's Kyurem... Kyurem is one of my favorite legendary dragon pokemon. I don't really watch pokemon anymore. But Kyurem is still my favorite.
What a dragon! I hope it's Kyurem... Kyurem is one of my favorite legendary dragon pokemon. I don't really watch pokemon anymore. But Kyurem is still my favorite.
4/19/2014 c37 5thepeachgrove
I hope Elsa puts them in their freakin' place.
Really epic story man! Realistic! (Sort of)
-Charles
5thepeachgroveI hope Elsa puts them in their freakin' place.
Really epic story man! Realistic! (Sort of)
-Charles
4/18/2014 c36 Drago201
YOU GO ELSA! :-)
YOU GO ELSA! :-)