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I love this story so much!
I love this story so much!
5/7/2014 c4 
11Vannaluv
This is a really cool fic. It's actually the first Lyvera fic I've read. This is so cool, AND OH. MY. GOD. I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU DYED YOUR HAIR PURPLE. THAT'S SERIOUSLY CRAZY CUZ I JUST DYED MINE BLUE. Mmkay bye, V
11VannaluvThis is a really cool fic. It's actually the first Lyvera fic I've read. This is so cool, AND OH. MY. GOD. I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU DYED YOUR HAIR PURPLE. THAT'S SERIOUSLY CRAZY CUZ I JUST DYED MINE BLUE. Mmkay bye, V
3/28/2014 c3 18marchofthedeathangels
im posting this as a chapter three review because I just had to tell you that I just died laughing my non existent ass off because YOUR FUCKING PROFILE PICTURE THINGIE IS OF A FUCKING CAT PIZZA THING AND IT JUST MADE MY NIGHT HOLY FUCKERY I LOVE IT AND IT LOOKS LIKE ITS SUPPOSED OT BE SOME UPLIKFTING POST OR SOMETHING BECAUSE ITS GOT GALAXY PRINT BUT NO ITS A FUCKING PIZZA CAT ALRIGTH MY NIGHT IS MADE AND I JUST HAD TO LET YOU KNOW now remember once again to stay a gucci pickle and don't let any hobos shack it up in your room now okay good bye now
Maya who is too gucci to be gucci :*
18marchofthedeathangelsim posting this as a chapter three review because I just had to tell you that I just died laughing my non existent ass off because YOUR FUCKING PROFILE PICTURE THINGIE IS OF A FUCKING CAT PIZZA THING AND IT JUST MADE MY NIGHT HOLY FUCKERY I LOVE IT AND IT LOOKS LIKE ITS SUPPOSED OT BE SOME UPLIKFTING POST OR SOMETHING BECAUSE ITS GOT GALAXY PRINT BUT NO ITS A FUCKING PIZZA CAT ALRIGTH MY NIGHT IS MADE AND I JUST HAD TO LET YOU KNOW now remember once again to stay a gucci pickle and don't let any hobos shack it up in your room now okay good bye now
Maya who is too gucci to be gucci :*
3/28/2014 c4 marchofthedeathangels
NO ALICIA CAN NOT DO ANYTHING WITH JEREMY WHATS HIS NAME BECAUSE SHE AND CLAIRE NEED TO BE TOGETHER AND MAKE BABIES EVEN THOUGH THAT ISN'T POSSIBLE BUT JUST THINK THE BABIES WOULD BE REALLY CUTE OMFG I WANT LYVERA BABIES NOW THEY MUST BE MADE AND MARKETED TO THE PUBLIC HOLY SHIT IMAGINE IF THAT HAPPENED THOUGH!
BUT NOO JOSH ISNT WITH A DUMB WHORE HE'S WITH SOMEONE WHO FEEL GUILT AND ISN'T A DUMB WHORE IN THIS STORY EVEN THOUGH SHE' ALWAYS MADE OUT TO BE ONE IN FANFICTION! I CAN NOT WAIT FOR LYVERA TBFH...
IM GLAD YOU UPDATED AND I FEEL SO DUMB BECAUSE I HAVENT UPDATED ANY STORIES BUT WROTE ONESHOTS AND I FEEL LIKE I SHOULD BE UPDATING HELLCUN OR WAKE BUT FUCK I JUST AUGHH... and I just realized I had caps lock on for all that... well to DAMN bad I aint gonna rewrite it now... but yeah I loved this chapter and I got a really good mental image of Alicia's hair blender look and Alicia just needs some Claire love the poor thing like she shouldn't have to go through this its sad ;-;
I hope you update soon bc this story is like fucking amazing and Lyvera is gonna probably be my favorite shiup for awhile even though right now I'm stuck on DerrickxxCam because of your other story idek the name of it but yeah! Also before I end this review I just wanted to say that your one of my favorite if not my all time favorite writer because yOUR WRITING IS SO FUCKING GORGEOUS SARAH LIKE YOU HAVE NO IDEA it makes baby walruses sing to prairie dogs yanno... Okay so stay gucci and I'll review on next update bc your making me have Lyvera feels and it hASN'T EVEN HAPPENED YET okay maybe now I should go update some stories omfg alright
BYE SARAH AND SORRY FOR WRITING A BUNCH OF NONSENSE SHIT BUT I JUST HAVE A LOT RUNNING THROUGH MY MIND IM SORRY FRO NOT BEING GUCCI!
not gucci Maya
nah just kidding gucci as FUCK Maya xx
NO ALICIA CAN NOT DO ANYTHING WITH JEREMY WHATS HIS NAME BECAUSE SHE AND CLAIRE NEED TO BE TOGETHER AND MAKE BABIES EVEN THOUGH THAT ISN'T POSSIBLE BUT JUST THINK THE BABIES WOULD BE REALLY CUTE OMFG I WANT LYVERA BABIES NOW THEY MUST BE MADE AND MARKETED TO THE PUBLIC HOLY SHIT IMAGINE IF THAT HAPPENED THOUGH!
BUT NOO JOSH ISNT WITH A DUMB WHORE HE'S WITH SOMEONE WHO FEEL GUILT AND ISN'T A DUMB WHORE IN THIS STORY EVEN THOUGH SHE' ALWAYS MADE OUT TO BE ONE IN FANFICTION! I CAN NOT WAIT FOR LYVERA TBFH...
IM GLAD YOU UPDATED AND I FEEL SO DUMB BECAUSE I HAVENT UPDATED ANY STORIES BUT WROTE ONESHOTS AND I FEEL LIKE I SHOULD BE UPDATING HELLCUN OR WAKE BUT FUCK I JUST AUGHH... and I just realized I had caps lock on for all that... well to DAMN bad I aint gonna rewrite it now... but yeah I loved this chapter and I got a really good mental image of Alicia's hair blender look and Alicia just needs some Claire love the poor thing like she shouldn't have to go through this its sad ;-;
I hope you update soon bc this story is like fucking amazing and Lyvera is gonna probably be my favorite shiup for awhile even though right now I'm stuck on DerrickxxCam because of your other story idek the name of it but yeah! Also before I end this review I just wanted to say that your one of my favorite if not my all time favorite writer because yOUR WRITING IS SO FUCKING GORGEOUS SARAH LIKE YOU HAVE NO IDEA it makes baby walruses sing to prairie dogs yanno... Okay so stay gucci and I'll review on next update bc your making me have Lyvera feels and it hASN'T EVEN HAPPENED YET okay maybe now I should go update some stories omfg alright
BYE SARAH AND SORRY FOR WRITING A BUNCH OF NONSENSE SHIT BUT I JUST HAVE A LOT RUNNING THROUGH MY MIND IM SORRY FRO NOT BEING GUCCI!
not gucci Maya
nah just kidding gucci as FUCK Maya xx
3/28/2014 c4 kaitlinjoi
Shmer. That's all I have to say because, right now, I am at a lose for words. Except for these few words: I feel bad for Alicia, Claire is just freaking awesome, olivia isn't a total bitch, josh is a douche. So, yeah. Oh and that was very good. :)
Shmer. That's all I have to say because, right now, I am at a lose for words. Except for these few words: I feel bad for Alicia, Claire is just freaking awesome, olivia isn't a total bitch, josh is a douche. So, yeah. Oh and that was very good. :)
3/28/2014 c4 10tyrells
ILY SARAH AND I THINK IT IS SO COOL THAT YOU DYED YOUR HAIR PURPLE BECAUSE I'VE ALWAYS WANTED TO DO THAT AND I'M ACTUALLY CONSIDERING DOING IT NOW, BUT FIRST I NEED TO CUT MY HAIR BECAUSE MY ENDS ARE GOING TO DRY OUT LIKE CRAZY IF I JUST DO IT NOW WHAT WITH THE BLEACH AND COLORING AND ALL AND THERE MUST BE A LOT OF PLANNING INVOLVED FOR ME TO ACTUALLY DO IT. SO I THINK IT'S SUPER AWESOME THAT YOU HAVE PURPLE HAIR NOW. IS IT DARK PURPLE? OR LIGHT PURPLE?
THIS CHAPTER WAS SO GREAT SARAH OMG. AND SARAH OMG IF YOU FEEL AWFUL FOR DOING ALL THESE AWFUL THINGS TO ALICIA THEN HOW CAN YOU STAND TO WRITE ALL THESE AWFUL THINGS AND BREAK HER HEART AND HAVE HER BEST FRIEND CHEAT ON HER BOYFRIEND AND HAVE JOSH JUST USE HER AND AGAIN JUST BREAK HER HEART AND MINE IN THE PROCESS BECAUSE I HAVE SO MUCH ALICIA FEELS. I NEED LYVERA SOON, OKAY? BECAUSE I DON'T KNOW HOW MUCH MORE HEARTBREAK I CAN TAKE FROM ALICIA BECUASE SHE IS A SPECIAL SOUL AND DESERVES ALL THE CUDDLES. I CAN;T WAIT.
I LOVED THE SEXY BITCHES PARTY AND I LOVE THE PC BONDING AND I LOVE THAT THEY ARE ALL THERE IN AND FOR SUPPORT OF ALICIA. YAY FOR ALICIA AND BOO FOR JOSH. I WONDER HOW ALICIA'S GOING TO TAKE THE NEWS OF OLIVIA AND JOSH IF AND WHEN SHE FINDS OUT. I'M EXCITED FOR EVERYTHING IN THIS STORY. OKAY? EVERYTHING. /EVERYTHING/ SO PLEASE UPDATE SOON. PLEASE AND THANK YOU. I LOVE ALICIA OKAY AND I'M TOO EXCITED
UPDATE SOON.
XX SHARINE
10tyrellsILY SARAH AND I THINK IT IS SO COOL THAT YOU DYED YOUR HAIR PURPLE BECAUSE I'VE ALWAYS WANTED TO DO THAT AND I'M ACTUALLY CONSIDERING DOING IT NOW, BUT FIRST I NEED TO CUT MY HAIR BECAUSE MY ENDS ARE GOING TO DRY OUT LIKE CRAZY IF I JUST DO IT NOW WHAT WITH THE BLEACH AND COLORING AND ALL AND THERE MUST BE A LOT OF PLANNING INVOLVED FOR ME TO ACTUALLY DO IT. SO I THINK IT'S SUPER AWESOME THAT YOU HAVE PURPLE HAIR NOW. IS IT DARK PURPLE? OR LIGHT PURPLE?
THIS CHAPTER WAS SO GREAT SARAH OMG. AND SARAH OMG IF YOU FEEL AWFUL FOR DOING ALL THESE AWFUL THINGS TO ALICIA THEN HOW CAN YOU STAND TO WRITE ALL THESE AWFUL THINGS AND BREAK HER HEART AND HAVE HER BEST FRIEND CHEAT ON HER BOYFRIEND AND HAVE JOSH JUST USE HER AND AGAIN JUST BREAK HER HEART AND MINE IN THE PROCESS BECAUSE I HAVE SO MUCH ALICIA FEELS. I NEED LYVERA SOON, OKAY? BECAUSE I DON'T KNOW HOW MUCH MORE HEARTBREAK I CAN TAKE FROM ALICIA BECUASE SHE IS A SPECIAL SOUL AND DESERVES ALL THE CUDDLES. I CAN;T WAIT.
I LOVED THE SEXY BITCHES PARTY AND I LOVE THE PC BONDING AND I LOVE THAT THEY ARE ALL THERE IN AND FOR SUPPORT OF ALICIA. YAY FOR ALICIA AND BOO FOR JOSH. I WONDER HOW ALICIA'S GOING TO TAKE THE NEWS OF OLIVIA AND JOSH IF AND WHEN SHE FINDS OUT. I'M EXCITED FOR EVERYTHING IN THIS STORY. OKAY? EVERYTHING. /EVERYTHING/ SO PLEASE UPDATE SOON. PLEASE AND THANK YOU. I LOVE ALICIA OKAY AND I'M TOO EXCITED
UPDATE SOON.
XX SHARINE
3/27/2014 c4 1tammywammy9
Let me tell ya, the part where you described her hair as if it had been through a blender was just perfect. Like, the mental image I got was hilariously tragic. Overall this was a nice female rage session lol. I'll be here for the next update. :)
1tammywammy9Let me tell ya, the part where you described her hair as if it had been through a blender was just perfect. Like, the mental image I got was hilariously tragic. Overall this was a nice female rage session lol. I'll be here for the next update. :)
3/25/2014 c4 Itschica
yeah it's me so hiiii
yeah anyways
yeah
yeah determined to always start with yeah
yeah okay so this story is so amazing so far and agghhhhh poor Aliciaaaaaaaa
yeah baii
yeah it's Chica
yeah it's me so hiiii
yeah anyways
yeah
yeah determined to always start with yeah
yeah okay so this story is so amazing so far and agghhhhh poor Aliciaaaaaaaa
yeah baii
yeah it's Chica
3/25/2014 c4 17cerulean cascades
IF U DO NOT UPDATE I WILL MAKE SURE U R NEVER ABLE YO SEE DAYLIGHT AGAIN ;)
17cerulean cascadesIF U DO NOT UPDATE I WILL MAKE SURE U R NEVER ABLE YO SEE DAYLIGHT AGAIN ;)
3/25/2014 c4 1rambles and dreams
HAHAHAHA THIS WAS AMAZING THANK YOU FOR UPDATING SARAH AND YOU KNOW WHAT THIS IS JUST GOING TO BE IN ALL CAPS BC I LOVE IT LIKE THIS
OKAY FIRST OFF I LOVE HOW THEY'RE ALL LIKE "SERIOUS FACES" HAHAHA THAT'S FUNNY ESPECIALLY WHEN THEY SAY SOMETHING WRONG AND EVERYONE IS JUST LIKE SHUT UP STOP TALKING AHAHAHAHAHAHA
AND THAT WAS FUNNY "WE HAVE NUTELA..." AHHAHAHA I LOVE THAT
ITS CUTE HOW THEY ALL FEEL BAD FOR HER BUT THEN THEY'RE LIKE "YOU NEED TO FORGET ABOUT HIM AND YEAH"
AHHAHA THIS WAS AMAZING AND I AM LITERALLY LAUGHING PRETTY HARD RIGHT NOW SARAH THIS IS PERFECT CAN YOU UPDATE LIKE...RIGHT NOW ?
BTW I LOVE REVIEWING IN CAPS AND I KIND OF WANT TO DO IT ON ALL YOUR UPDATES BUT THEN CAPS IS LIKE YOUR THING SOO...
-peyton c:
1rambles and dreamsHAHAHAHA THIS WAS AMAZING THANK YOU FOR UPDATING SARAH AND YOU KNOW WHAT THIS IS JUST GOING TO BE IN ALL CAPS BC I LOVE IT LIKE THIS
OKAY FIRST OFF I LOVE HOW THEY'RE ALL LIKE "SERIOUS FACES" HAHAHA THAT'S FUNNY ESPECIALLY WHEN THEY SAY SOMETHING WRONG AND EVERYONE IS JUST LIKE SHUT UP STOP TALKING AHAHAHAHAHAHA
AND THAT WAS FUNNY "WE HAVE NUTELA..." AHHAHAHA I LOVE THAT
ITS CUTE HOW THEY ALL FEEL BAD FOR HER BUT THEN THEY'RE LIKE "YOU NEED TO FORGET ABOUT HIM AND YEAH"
AHHAHA THIS WAS AMAZING AND I AM LITERALLY LAUGHING PRETTY HARD RIGHT NOW SARAH THIS IS PERFECT CAN YOU UPDATE LIKE...RIGHT NOW ?
BTW I LOVE REVIEWING IN CAPS AND I KIND OF WANT TO DO IT ON ALL YOUR UPDATES BUT THEN CAPS IS LIKE YOUR THING SOO...
-peyton c:
3/11/2014 c3 Serena Ning
Is it okay if I randomly go bursting into this story and "accidentally" kill Josh? Great chapter by the way.
Is it okay if I randomly go bursting into this story and "accidentally" kill Josh? Great chapter by the way.
3/13/2014 c3 4tarantinos
I'M ACTUALLY SUPER HAPPY THEY BROKE UP BUT THAT WAS EXPECTED BECAUSE OF CLAIRE AND ALICIA AND YEAH k you're such an amazing writer and i will never understand how you make your multichaps so great
I'VE BEEN OBSESSED WITH SUPERNATURAL LATELY I'M ALREADY ON SEASON FIVE DO YOU WATCH IT
UPDATE SOON
lily
ps: yes i plan on leaving all my reviews in mostly caps
pss: the first thing i saw in the a/n was "since I have a D"
psss: /hugs you because parents and grades suck sometimes i've been there
4tarantinosI'M ACTUALLY SUPER HAPPY THEY BROKE UP BUT THAT WAS EXPECTED BECAUSE OF CLAIRE AND ALICIA AND YEAH k you're such an amazing writer and i will never understand how you make your multichaps so great
I'VE BEEN OBSESSED WITH SUPERNATURAL LATELY I'M ALREADY ON SEASON FIVE DO YOU WATCH IT
UPDATE SOON
lily
ps: yes i plan on leaving all my reviews in mostly caps
pss: the first thing i saw in the a/n was "since I have a D"
psss: /hugs you because parents and grades suck sometimes i've been there
3/12/2014 c3 1tammywammy9
So let me start of by saying awwwwe, im awesome person of the day well, yesterday lol but im touched. Im really glad that you like Lyvera bc usually the most creative thing I come up with is my pizza topping so viva la Lyvera. I liked this chapter cuz you perfectly captured a realistic breakup. So kudos. I'll be here for the next update. :)
1tammywammy9So let me start of by saying awwwwe, im awesome person of the day well, yesterday lol but im touched. Im really glad that you like Lyvera bc usually the most creative thing I come up with is my pizza topping so viva la Lyvera. I liked this chapter cuz you perfectly captured a realistic breakup. So kudos. I'll be here for the next update. :)