for The Mobster's Thief12/28/2018 c5 panther73110
Just found your story and love that you came back and can't wait for the next chapter.
Just found your story and love that you came back and can't wait for the next chapter.
11/11/2018 c3 liela-k
I'm liking the story but who exactly is bella doing this for? steal what for who? she shot Aro so she has no deal.
I'm liking the story but who exactly is bella doing this for? steal what for who? she shot Aro so she has no deal.
10/24/2018 c5 Vtweetymccn
Ok the guys want to know if Bella is going to use her assets and become a stripper?
KEEP WRITING ️ ️
Ok the guys want to know if Bella is going to use her assets and become a stripper?
KEEP WRITING ️ ️
8/27/2018 c5 Guest
Aro was Russian in a previous chapter. I like where the story is going.
Aro was Russian in a previous chapter. I like where the story is going.
8/26/2018 c5 dowlingnana
He's doing a party to catch someone and she's preparing to go in to try and catch his goods. Oh this is gonna be great to see who actually gets the 'goods.' lol I'm thinking this is where she'll get caught, but good. ;o) thanx
He's doing a party to catch someone and she's preparing to go in to try and catch his goods. Oh this is gonna be great to see who actually gets the 'goods.' lol I'm thinking this is where she'll get caught, but good. ;o) thanx
8/26/2018 c4 dowlingnana
Sigh* Well I can't say I like reading Edward having sex with any female that's not Bella; insinuating it and actually reading the act is way different. But, I made it thru and hopefully that will be it or I can't read anymore, (sorry its me) and I hope with Bella entering his world it will soon only be him and her. Also, I hope there's a hea as well. Your genre doesn't help me to know. Won't Edward and family be shocked to find out who actually did the Italians in. lol I can't believe James made it out though, wth? I'm still with you for now and otherwise am enjoying the story. I love me some mobward. This Edward is one hard ass! thanx ;o)
Sigh* Well I can't say I like reading Edward having sex with any female that's not Bella; insinuating it and actually reading the act is way different. But, I made it thru and hopefully that will be it or I can't read anymore, (sorry its me) and I hope with Bella entering his world it will soon only be him and her. Also, I hope there's a hea as well. Your genre doesn't help me to know. Won't Edward and family be shocked to find out who actually did the Italians in. lol I can't believe James made it out though, wth? I'm still with you for now and otherwise am enjoying the story. I love me some mobward. This Edward is one hard ass! thanx ;o)
8/26/2018 c3 dowlingnana
Dang; lets add maybe just a little cold (hearted) gulp! I wouldn't want to cross her. thanx ;o)
Dang; lets add maybe just a little cold (hearted) gulp! I wouldn't want to cross her. thanx ;o)
8/26/2018 c2 dowlingnana
Well, lets add ballsy to her list of attributes and gutsy too. Wow! thanx ;o)
Well, lets add ballsy to her list of attributes and gutsy too. Wow! thanx ;o)
8/24/2018 c4 
3louanne61
I was looking forward to reading this story, but I have never read such a vile Edward, I have read a lot of stories. So this is where I bow out.
3louanne61I was looking forward to reading this story, but I have never read such a vile Edward, I have read a lot of stories. So this is where I bow out.
8/21/2018 c5 Pattsy1994
Alice and Jasper are going to make a formidable pair for the cullens, l can just see it. Oh Bella, you are so biting more than you can chew.
Alice and Jasper are going to make a formidable pair for the cullens, l can just see it. Oh Bella, you are so biting more than you can chew.