for The Mobster's Thief8/21/2018 c4 Pattsy1994
Edward was really a pig to Jessica, really. How did James manage to escape, Bella is in trouble. Thanks.
Edward was really a pig to Jessica, really. How did James manage to escape, Bella is in trouble. Thanks.
8/20/2018 c5 keljvt
Always like a little Mobward and it appears you have a good one. Always love some EPOV.
Always like a little Mobward and it appears you have a good one. Always love some EPOV.
8/19/2018 c5 lala43
I like your story line and your Bella rocks. But, her self-assurance borders on insanity and you’ve made her too smart for that. Could you at least give her slap of reality to bring her out of her back to earth. Meanwhile, you’ve created MafiaWard that is totally grounded in reality. I think he’s the closest to real world crime boss I’ve read. I think you’re doing mah-velous job. -Leila
I like your story line and your Bella rocks. But, her self-assurance borders on insanity and you’ve made her too smart for that. Could you at least give her slap of reality to bring her out of her back to earth. Meanwhile, you’ve created MafiaWard that is totally grounded in reality. I think he’s the closest to real world crime boss I’ve read. I think you’re doing mah-velous job. -Leila
8/19/2018 c2 MadMooey18
I am loving this story and that its your first is amazing.
I bet you would be exhausted writing that much. I have a question for you, if Bella killed Aro who would pay her for killing Edward.
You write with a quick pace so there is no room to be bored. I can not wait to read Edward's point of view.
I am loving this story and that its your first is amazing.
I bet you would be exhausted writing that much. I have a question for you, if Bella killed Aro who would pay her for killing Edward.
You write with a quick pace so there is no room to be bored. I can not wait to read Edward's point of view.
8/19/2018 c5 Guest
I just discovered this story and I am hooked! I’m excited to see what comes next.
I just discovered this story and I am hooked! I’m excited to see what comes next.
6/1/2017 c4 Guest
I want more chapters
I want more chapters
9/18/2016 c4 twilight moonlig
Hi ! I really like your story and hope that you continue it. It's still on alert but unfortunately you never post anything but I still like it.
Hi ! I really like your story and hope that you continue it. It's still on alert but unfortunately you never post anything but I still like it.
4/28/2015 c4 hiiammary
I really likes your story. would you pls continue?
I really likes your story. would you pls continue?
2/12/2015 c4 Guest
AHHH lemons(: i really liked this
AHHH lemons(: i really liked this