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2/28/2014 c2 16Baldore
Another intense installment! I still caught some errors in spelling or grammar and it still felt slightly rushed but its much better. And things are really hearing up quickly! Keep up the good work!
2/28/2014 c2 69YellowAngela
I like the changes you made. I'm curious to find out who the mysterious people are and what's going on with Rex.
2/24/2014 c1 Rainbow Colours
I can't wait for the next chapter.

That was a good start to the story.
2/26/2014 c1 16Baldore
Hey, you've got a good start to this. But I'd just like to say that the chapter felt slightly rushed and there were several grammatical/punctuation errors. But it looks promising, keep up the good work.
2/24/2014 c1 69YellowAngela
Good start.
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