for The Nightsaber11/11/2014 c11 
3Rio's Desire
I am enjoying this story immensely, I wish I had been sent an email when it was updated, I am so pleased to see there are so many more chapters now!
3Rio's DesireI am enjoying this story immensely, I wish I had been sent an email when it was updated, I am so pleased to see there are so many more chapters now!
9/13/2014 c21 little-red-wolf-5793
No, it definitely wasn't too sappy, it was lovely! Can't wait for the next chapter, love this story!
No, it definitely wasn't too sappy, it was lovely! Can't wait for the next chapter, love this story!
8/15/2014 c21 Hybrid-Entity
Looking forward to seeing the reactions both the Horde and Alliance members :D
Looking forward to seeing the reactions both the Horde and Alliance members :D
8/12/2014 c21 Nireida
I have mixed feelings right now.. On the one hand, I feel that it was perfectly done, but on the other I still want more to read. That said, this is one of my favorite fics. Thank you for writing such an amazing story. c:
I have mixed feelings right now.. On the one hand, I feel that it was perfectly done, but on the other I still want more to read. That said, this is one of my favorite fics. Thank you for writing such an amazing story. c:
8/12/2014 c21 8I'mNotShortI'mFunsize
Nngh. Sorry for not posting a review sooner. I went camping, so I didn't have access to a computer for a few days. Thank you so much for the mention though. :D
I am so pleased with how this story has turned out. Their meeting after two years apart seemed just right, and the sex scenes were nice without going over-board. You wouldn't believe how many badly-written M stories there are with mature moments that take up what seems like twenty pages. It's gotten to the point where I generally don't click on "M" anymore unless it's a horror story or something.
Anyways, it was nice to see them talking again and catching up. I loved how Arolei completely exploded at him when they were finally alone. For some reason, the words seemed to remind me of a certain scene in The Incredibles... :P Nevertheless, excellent writing as always, and I look forward to reading more of your work.
Ciao.
8I'mNotShortI'mFunsizeNngh. Sorry for not posting a review sooner. I went camping, so I didn't have access to a computer for a few days. Thank you so much for the mention though. :D
I am so pleased with how this story has turned out. Their meeting after two years apart seemed just right, and the sex scenes were nice without going over-board. You wouldn't believe how many badly-written M stories there are with mature moments that take up what seems like twenty pages. It's gotten to the point where I generally don't click on "M" anymore unless it's a horror story or something.
Anyways, it was nice to see them talking again and catching up. I loved how Arolei completely exploded at him when they were finally alone. For some reason, the words seemed to remind me of a certain scene in The Incredibles... :P Nevertheless, excellent writing as always, and I look forward to reading more of your work.
Ciao.
8/11/2014 c21 4nashiro
-flips a table-
-demands you write more-
this is just so wonnnnderful and beautiful and :dDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
4nashiro-flips a table-
-demands you write more-
this is just so wonnnnderful and beautiful and :dDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
8/8/2014 c20 1Uthul
Can't wait for the next chapter. In regards to the a/n in the beginning a cliff hanger is a very good way to capture the attention of readers when I write books (not fanfics) I usually end several chapters with a huge cliffhanger, they're amazing weapons in an authors arsenal
1UthulCan't wait for the next chapter. In regards to the a/n in the beginning a cliff hanger is a very good way to capture the attention of readers when I write books (not fanfics) I usually end several chapters with a huge cliffhanger, they're amazing weapons in an authors arsenal
8/8/2014 c20 walksinstarlight
Oh man, what a chapter! Soo glad to see them finally together, it's been a long time coming :) the past few chapters have definitely been "page turners" for me! I'm excited to read more of their story!
Oh man, what a chapter! Soo glad to see them finally together, it's been a long time coming :) the past few chapters have definitely been "page turners" for me! I'm excited to read more of their story!