
8/1/2014 c17
8I'mNotShortI'mFunsize
And so the truth comes out. I really enjoyed this chapter. Keep up the awesome work!
P.S. Zen, you should feel bad you jerk! xD

And so the truth comes out. I really enjoyed this chapter. Keep up the awesome work!
P.S. Zen, you should feel bad you jerk! xD
8/1/2014 c17
3The-Cozy-Dormouse
This story is so good. I really hope you'll keep writing, as I can't wait to find out what happens next.

This story is so good. I really hope you'll keep writing, as I can't wait to find out what happens next.
7/31/2014 c10
1zeija
I love how creative this story is! Not pure smutt but enough sexual tension to keep it interesting. I also appreciate the quick updates. Keep it up!

I love how creative this story is! Not pure smutt but enough sexual tension to keep it interesting. I also appreciate the quick updates. Keep it up!
7/31/2014 c16
2El.Oh.Vee.Ee
Holy sweet mother of tits it's about time. I was so goddamn excited to find that you'd updated not once, but THREE times since I last checked and that the long awaited reveal had finally come. Aaagh.I can't wait to see how this all plays out. Please update soon, I'm dying here.

Holy sweet mother of tits it's about time. I was so goddamn excited to find that you'd updated not once, but THREE times since I last checked and that the long awaited reveal had finally come. Aaagh.I can't wait to see how this all plays out. Please update soon, I'm dying here.
7/31/2014 c16
8I'mNotShortI'mFunsize
So good. I am thoroughly enjoying this tale you've managed to spin. I'll keep this review short since it's late, but keep it up! I look forward to more.

So good. I am thoroughly enjoying this tale you've managed to spin. I'll keep this review short since it's late, but keep it up! I look forward to more.
7/29/2014 c16 Rakjo
FINALLY and now i have to wait to the next chapther for the confromtation DAMN you are evill with dem cliffhangers
FINALLY and now i have to wait to the next chapther for the confromtation DAMN you are evill with dem cliffhangers
7/28/2014 c16 Guest
Ah! Now there's that long-awaited chapter! Definitely well written. Poor Zen too shocked of words for Minutes! XD
Ah! Now there's that long-awaited chapter! Definitely well written. Poor Zen too shocked of words for Minutes! XD
7/28/2014 c16 roguekittiekat
I can imagine Lar'ja is going to sniff her and be just fine because cuz she smells the same and think Zen is an idiot too lol.
I can imagine Lar'ja is going to sniff her and be just fine because cuz she smells the same and think Zen is an idiot too lol.
7/27/2014 c15 Guest
Awesome chapter like all the others. I hope Zen remembers his attachment to the saber even when he finds out she is really a Night Elf. Can't wait for the next chapter
Awesome chapter like all the others. I hope Zen remembers his attachment to the saber even when he finds out she is really a Night Elf. Can't wait for the next chapter
7/27/2014 c15 roguekittiekat
I dont think its too dark it feels very natural for the way its progressing. I am very much looking forward to the next chapter.
I dont think its too dark it feels very natural for the way its progressing. I am very much looking forward to the next chapter.
7/27/2014 c15 nashiro
can I politely ask you to reveal Laur-ke as a night elf because kjagfg the suspense is killing me
can I politely ask you to reveal Laur-ke as a night elf because kjagfg the suspense is killing me
7/22/2014 c14 Rakjo
aaaawww you cant leave me hanging like that YOU EVIL PERSON god dammit ... i hate you in this moment
aaaawww you cant leave me hanging like that YOU EVIL PERSON god dammit ... i hate you in this moment