for The Nightsaber3/9/2014 c8 roguekittiekat
I have seriously become obsessed with this fic now. *gets out creepy stalker gear*
I have seriously become obsessed with this fic now. *gets out creepy stalker gear*
3/8/2014 c7 Hybrid-Entity
Interesting story. THough I have one question. Why she can't remember her previous memories and why can't she transform back to night elf?
Interesting story. THough I have one question. Why she can't remember her previous memories and why can't she transform back to night elf?
3/5/2014 c7 
4EnviousCasca
"Zen yanked his tusks free and spun around ready to pounce. Laur-ke was already loping down the beach tail wagging in taunt. "I'm gonna get you damn cat," Zen roared as he took chase."
Seriously. It's the tiny, jovial moments like this I just LOVE. The relationship between the two is believable AND adorable and I can't wait for her to get her memories back. Will she reveal herself right away or keep it a secret for as long as she can to maintain the happy life she's found? I'm excited to find out!
As for the troll accent, I think you've written it perfectly. I've read some troll stories where the accent is too thick so the troll's words are either completely illiterate or sound like they have a cold. You also keep in mind that he's going to sound different depending whether he's speaking Orcish or his native Zandali, which is awesome.
Keep up the good work!
4EnviousCasca"Zen yanked his tusks free and spun around ready to pounce. Laur-ke was already loping down the beach tail wagging in taunt. "I'm gonna get you damn cat," Zen roared as he took chase."
Seriously. It's the tiny, jovial moments like this I just LOVE. The relationship between the two is believable AND adorable and I can't wait for her to get her memories back. Will she reveal herself right away or keep it a secret for as long as she can to maintain the happy life she's found? I'm excited to find out!
As for the troll accent, I think you've written it perfectly. I've read some troll stories where the accent is too thick so the troll's words are either completely illiterate or sound like they have a cold. You also keep in mind that he's going to sound different depending whether he's speaking Orcish or his native Zandali, which is awesome.
Keep up the good work!
3/5/2014 c7 Azarune
Oh things are going to get interesting when our druid friend gets her night elf form back. Can't wait!
Oh things are going to get interesting when our druid friend gets her night elf form back. Can't wait!
3/4/2014 c7 roguekittiekat
I follow quite a few stories in quite a few different fandoms but I must admit I am checking my phone every time it bleeps to see if it's a new chapter to this story because I am completely infatuated with it. I am really dreading and looking forward to when Luar-ke remembers everything and Zen's response.
I follow quite a few stories in quite a few different fandoms but I must admit I am checking my phone every time it bleeps to see if it's a new chapter to this story because I am completely infatuated with it. I am really dreading and looking forward to when Luar-ke remembers everything and Zen's response.
3/4/2014 c7 8I'mNotShortI'mFunsize
Gah, it is rare that I find a Warcraft story that I enjoy with original characters, but this one is quite well written. Kudos to you Sir or Madame. :3 I have added you to my followed stories list, and I very much look forward to reading more of your work. In regards to your inquiry at the beginning of this chapter, I must say you seem to be doing a splendid job on the Troll Accent in my opinion. Then again, I mainly play Alliance, so I'm not exactly the best judge.
Nevertheless, keep up the good work. ;D
8I'mNotShortI'mFunsizeGah, it is rare that I find a Warcraft story that I enjoy with original characters, but this one is quite well written. Kudos to you Sir or Madame. :3 I have added you to my followed stories list, and I very much look forward to reading more of your work. In regards to your inquiry at the beginning of this chapter, I must say you seem to be doing a splendid job on the Troll Accent in my opinion. Then again, I mainly play Alliance, so I'm not exactly the best judge.
Nevertheless, keep up the good work. ;D
3/1/2014 c6 4EnviousCasca
Words cannot even BEGIN to describe just how much I love your story so far! It's fantastic!
I really like that you begin each chapter with Laur-ke's point of view. Between that and how well you describe her, it's easy to tell what she's thinking while the reader's still following Zen. (Especially in situations like the run-in at the stables! Oh Zen, you so silly.)
Keep up the good work. :)
4EnviousCascaWords cannot even BEGIN to describe just how much I love your story so far! It's fantastic!
I really like that you begin each chapter with Laur-ke's point of view. Between that and how well you describe her, it's easy to tell what she's thinking while the reader's still following Zen. (Especially in situations like the run-in at the stables! Oh Zen, you so silly.)
Keep up the good work. :)
2/27/2014 c5 roguekittiekat
Definitely loving this story! Especially the dual nature of the saber. So going to be following this story.
Definitely loving this story! Especially the dual nature of the saber. So going to be following this story.
2/27/2014 c5 Bohmzawe
An update! Yay! Loving the end to this chapter, its getting me real excited for what's next :) I see that your story is gaining popularity also, hope that's a significant boost to your inspiration! Cant wait for the next chapter
An update! Yay! Loving the end to this chapter, its getting me real excited for what's next :) I see that your story is gaining popularity also, hope that's a significant boost to your inspiration! Cant wait for the next chapter
2/26/2014 c4 Rakjo
i like it :3 if you can please continue it. and if you can do the chapters a more long
i like it :3 if you can please continue it. and if you can do the chapters a more long
2/25/2014 c3 3LazulithLacie
Soo, I've read all three chapters upon seeing this story and I must say, I'm intrigued. I had waited for something new in the Troll/Nelf section and was happy to find this. There are few stories that are rather short per chap and yet that's enough to get me interested - and so is your story ! I like it, I'm very excited to see what'll come and happen next and how you will shape this :) I'll definitely keep track of this as your way of writing was pleasing and yeah, I really want to know what the next chapter's going to bring ! I'd love to learn more about your characters and story hehe. Still, take your time, I wish you a lot of motivation & inspiration ;) Have a nice day.
Cheers !
3LazulithLacieSoo, I've read all three chapters upon seeing this story and I must say, I'm intrigued. I had waited for something new in the Troll/Nelf section and was happy to find this. There are few stories that are rather short per chap and yet that's enough to get me interested - and so is your story ! I like it, I'm very excited to see what'll come and happen next and how you will shape this :) I'll definitely keep track of this as your way of writing was pleasing and yeah, I really want to know what the next chapter's going to bring ! I'd love to learn more about your characters and story hehe. Still, take your time, I wish you a lot of motivation & inspiration ;) Have a nice day.
Cheers !
2/25/2014 c3 Bohmzawe
This is a great start to an interesting story, I'm hooked! Can't wait until the plot begins to thicken a bit more and I see more personality traits from the poor little elfie! Hanging out for the next update .
This is a great start to an interesting story, I'm hooked! Can't wait until the plot begins to thicken a bit more and I see more personality traits from the poor little elfie! Hanging out for the next update .