for Naruto: YōsoKage7/20/2015 c2 Guest
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6/23/2014 c2 Madgormley
Great so far i would like to see this continue and if you can please make the chapters a bit longer
Great so far i would like to see this continue and if you can please make the chapters a bit longer
3/13/2014 c2 Guest
I was like WTF
I was like WTF
3/12/2014 c2 Spyash2
Ok, first of all, not to flame you or anything: make the chapters longer.
And for the love of god, proof read the entire thing before you post the chapter. Heck, go over it again because I see a lot places where there needs to be spaces.
Ok, first of all, not to flame you or anything: make the chapters longer.
And for the love of god, proof read the entire thing before you post the chapter. Heck, go over it again because I see a lot places where there needs to be spaces.
1112/28/2014 c1 SushiSauceMaker
There were some mistakes, so I suggest that you correct them. Overall it interesting
There were some mistakes, so I suggest that you correct them. Overall it interesting