
6/27/2024 c6 reap2
This fic been awesome, but I like to see them react, maybe as a side story or one shots, which basically means inviting Grand Wizard Marshall Zelretch, or him inviting himself really.
And decided on who will be his Audience, which is the Adult's, and making them react to every fate series, Anime/Manga, Video Games, that has Shirou Emiya in it, to start off with, before finishing with FGO, then if you like, you can start them on Fanfiction.
All so the Adult's can see the potential, and the possibility his future could have taken, while hitting them with a horrible chilling possiblity, Archer Emiya CG, and seeing his past and etcetera.
then when they get to FGO, they will be hit with another chilling possiblity, Alter Emiya and his past, and etc., before witnessing Senji Muramasa, and the theory that he might be Shirou Ancestor.
This fic been awesome, but I like to see them react, maybe as a side story or one shots, which basically means inviting Grand Wizard Marshall Zelretch, or him inviting himself really.
And decided on who will be his Audience, which is the Adult's, and making them react to every fate series, Anime/Manga, Video Games, that has Shirou Emiya in it, to start off with, before finishing with FGO, then if you like, you can start them on Fanfiction.
All so the Adult's can see the potential, and the possibility his future could have taken, while hitting them with a horrible chilling possiblity, Archer Emiya CG, and seeing his past and etcetera.
then when they get to FGO, they will be hit with another chilling possiblity, Alter Emiya and his past, and etc., before witnessing Senji Muramasa, and the theory that he might be Shirou Ancestor.
4/25/2024 c3 Crimsonph34r
Interesting set up. How far do you plan on going? To the Fifth Grail War or to the start of HSDK? I’m interested in what turn if events can happen with the meeting of these two worlds.
Interesting set up. How far do you plan on going? To the Fifth Grail War or to the start of HSDK? I’m interested in what turn if events can happen with the meeting of these two worlds.
4/25/2024 c2 Crimsonph34r
Not gonna lie I never put these two amazing stories together in my head. So far you’ve done a great job capturing the characters personalities. Given what we know of Shirou’s determination and stubbornness the masters would have an interesting time guiding and training him.
My biggest curiosity is how you portray tge masters’ concerns of how Shirou values everyone else before himself. His mentality of being a blade along with Shigure’s “forgingtechniques should be interesting.
Not gonna lie I never put these two amazing stories together in my head. So far you’ve done a great job capturing the characters personalities. Given what we know of Shirou’s determination and stubbornness the masters would have an interesting time guiding and training him.
My biggest curiosity is how you portray tge masters’ concerns of how Shirou values everyone else before himself. His mentality of being a blade along with Shigure’s “forgingtechniques should be interesting.
9/28/2023 c6 brayanamaya963
Cinco largos años que han pasado oh Señor los olvidos o arenas del tiempo el manto de la noche sin fin estrellas brillan iba y esta obra nunca acabó y nunca prosperó hermosa semilla que retoñó pero se secó con el viento y el sol te duró al hombre cinco añitos hombre sí estaba repasando algunas cosas que tenías por ahí yo entonces mira ahí está joya de nuevo digo voy a leerla de nuevo doncella siesta espero que haya estado bien estos cinco años que tengas prosperidad que está en toda tu familia bien y nos vemos un saludo desde Madrid España
Cinco largos años que han pasado oh Señor los olvidos o arenas del tiempo el manto de la noche sin fin estrellas brillan iba y esta obra nunca acabó y nunca prosperó hermosa semilla que retoñó pero se secó con el viento y el sol te duró al hombre cinco añitos hombre sí estaba repasando algunas cosas que tenías por ahí yo entonces mira ahí está joya de nuevo digo voy a leerla de nuevo doncella siesta espero que haya estado bien estos cinco años que tengas prosperidad que está en toda tu familia bien y nos vemos un saludo desde Madrid España
11/20/2022 c1 HungrySnack
So if you were to continue this, the path forward I see is the following outline:
Timeskip to Kitsuru's Death
Timeskip to a bit before the Fifth Holy Grail War
One ta two chapter arc that showcases Shiro's current skill (and everyone who could be a combatant in F/SN)
Fate/Stay Night
So if you were to continue this, the path forward I see is the following outline:
Timeskip to Kitsuru's Death
Timeskip to a bit before the Fifth Holy Grail War
One ta two chapter arc that showcases Shiro's current skill (and everyone who could be a combatant in F/SN)
Fate/Stay Night
11/20/2022 c5 HungrySnack
Would have been better without adding fandoms. If you just kept it a straight crossover, a clearer goal would emerge.
Would have been better without adding fandoms. If you just kept it a straight crossover, a clearer goal would emerge.
4/10/2022 c5 blasrt85
Just stumbled across this, Its great. Easy to follow pace, good build up. The only downside would be lack of background info for newcomers. Thanks for sharing.
Just stumbled across this, Its great. Easy to follow pace, good build up. The only downside would be lack of background info for newcomers. Thanks for sharing.