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4/12/2017 c3 Masterx01
Well, i dont think that a sword made of wood would prevent Shirou from reading its memories.

keep in mind that if Shirous lose his distorted way of see the world, he wouldnt be able of use his reality marble and considerating that the tracing is dependent of that thing, if he lose that his projection skills will be affected...

To the Ryozampaku people, say 'magic swords' might more or less be right due them not being magus but the correct term would be mystic codes. And this will affect the standing of Kosaka secret forging skill in the world... As good as those weapons are compared to mystic codes or even conceptual weapons there is no doubt who will be better... Althought that also depends of how much of thisis comon knowledge in the underworld...

It was somewhat of a joke with Taiga and magic swords but the knowledge of magic keep being a secret, so normal people shouldnt know about it or else sooner or later the Clock Tower will be making a manhunt.

and talking about the Clock Tower... How do they seem that some non-magus people know about it? Like for example Hayato? The Clock Tower isnt below of purging an entire city if the secrecy of the magic is in danger of being leaked out.
4/12/2017 c5 Neema Amiry
nice chapter
4/12/2017 c5 cbaqx4
love the story so far!
cant wait for the next chapter.
I dare you to write Shiro attempt to mimic Bruce Wanye playboy persona :P
maybe a certain Fuji nee or sakura reaction?
4/12/2017 c2 Masterx01
Not Heroic Spirits... Servants. The Heroic Spirits are like god-like existences so powerful in the Age of Man as the gods in the Age of Gods era and they during their respective times, the gods, were able to do whatever they wanted, destroy a planet with their pinky, reshape the reality, time, space, whatever.

The Servants are the tone down version of the Heroic Spirits, way way way more weak than their originals in the Throne due the limitations of the magic with which they were called. No matter how powerful a human is, they will never have the power to bring an Heroic Spirit and make it do their biddings, it imposible...

And the masters in Kenichi verse have physical stats around the same lvl of a low-mid/high class servant, maybe mid-low depending of the people.

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Well, outside that everything is good, your writing skill are good, good job.
4/12/2017 c5 3Sajuuk
hello lol
good chapter
i really want to see what green Arrow, batman and ironman will give like ideas for shirou
i think some research in detective work, psychologie, gadget works, weapons, armour and why not other vehicule to move around
but i think to know tech and physic will help shirou a lot
also some ideas from naruto or other magic and fantasy book will help shirou with his magic skill
i think that doctor strange will give some grey ideas with magic for shirou and help him keep his humanity
i like the mixte with Swort Art Online and hope that will give shirou some good skill and ideas for weapons and with some combat capacity
i really want to see what shirou master and kayabe akihiko will be like when they meet
also you have added Samantha carter so can i hope some stargate crossover much later in your story ?
please answer me !
so countinue the good work, write a lot, go wild and have fun
by
sajuuk
ps : who is koiso kenji ?
4/12/2017 c5 3Bigreader in The Omniverse
Steel castle in the sky? What us that in reference to?
4/12/2017 c1 Masterx01
Seems interesting but you had to be careful with the Nasuverse lore... That thing is pretty convoluted and there are some things that will clash with something in the Nasuverse no matter what... For example Yami, If their objetives causes enough ruckus in the world or causes something else to move in the world due the problems they may cause, Alaya will shoot down them without thinking it two times.
4/12/2017 c5 Hypothetical Spiritual Entity
Nanananananananananananananana Shirou! He already posesses a Tohno gland that'd make Batsy blush, and now he's getting the money. Hopefully, his influence will keep Kayaba from going batshit enough to get SAOing on 10000 innocent gamers. If not, well, we have our resident Batman to save the day and seduce anything with a matching pair of X chromosomes.
4/12/2017 c5 2SpaceDandyman
sweet another chapter. it was great i loved every word of it cant wait til the next chapter
4/12/2017 c5 6Fiori75
... this will not end well. But for some reason I can't stop smiling. Loved this chapter, please keep up the good work.
4/12/2017 c5 Suzululu4moe
Lol his club... alone or together they all have the potential to trigger a counter guardian being summoned to end their messes...
4/12/2017 c5 16BukkakeNoJutsu
I'm ok with more xovers
4/11/2017 c5 Greyjedi449t
Looking forward to the next chapter :)
4/11/2017 c5 Ultimate-Zelda-fan
Talk about making strong network connections!
4/11/2017 c5 ZeroNu
I like where you are going with Shiro's new sidekick's can't wait to see what they think about the Masters :)
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