for How to Train a Sword of Life4/8/2014 c1 
9melkun
wow!
I haven't see yet a story fsnxkenichi, but I always wanted!
hope you continue with it! I would be waiting with anticipation!
also, love the chapter, the personalitys of the characters are so well presented.
9melkunwow!
I haven't see yet a story fsnxkenichi, but I always wanted!
hope you continue with it! I would be waiting with anticipation!
also, love the chapter, the personalitys of the characters are so well presented.
4/5/2014 c1 dalulzing
Great concept. Please don't let it die like the millions of fics in the graveyard of my mind.
Great concept. Please don't let it die like the millions of fics in the graveyard of my mind.
4/2/2014 c1 Shiki Shiori
Mm... as long as shirou does not ursurp kenichi's place, this may turn interestingly. For now, a question. Are you going to deviate from canon HSDK or not?
Mm... as long as shirou does not ursurp kenichi's place, this may turn interestingly. For now, a question. Are you going to deviate from canon HSDK or not?
4/1/2014 c1 jacohuff
I love this idea and while people have attempted there has been no really great Shigure apprentice fanfic and even better with Shirou "understanding" weapons she teaches him. please update this story it sounds like a great one
I love this idea and while people have attempted there has been no really great Shigure apprentice fanfic and even better with Shirou "understanding" weapons she teaches him. please update this story it sounds like a great one
3/31/2014 c1 Will
A nice prologue. So, in this story shirou met the masters of ryouzanpaku? i am guessing he will be a disciple to shigure if not all of the master? With a master like that, he would be a pretty powerful contender by the time the fifth grail war start. Will you pair shirou with shigure? From the looks of it, their age gap is pretty big, but maybe you could do something about it. Anyway keep up the good work and I await your next chapter
A nice prologue. So, in this story shirou met the masters of ryouzanpaku? i am guessing he will be a disciple to shigure if not all of the master? With a master like that, he would be a pretty powerful contender by the time the fifth grail war start. Will you pair shirou with shigure? From the looks of it, their age gap is pretty big, but maybe you could do something about it. Anyway keep up the good work and I await your next chapter
3/23/2014 c1 1Ovan07
The story seems interesting, I look forward the next development. Will it be oriented more with the Holy Grail War, or will we see more development with the world of ryozampaku, I think that the latter seems more interesting.
I look forward to read more.
Sorry if my grammar suck.
1Ovan07The story seems interesting, I look forward the next development. Will it be oriented more with the Holy Grail War, or will we see more development with the world of ryozampaku, I think that the latter seems more interesting.
I look forward to read more.
Sorry if my grammar suck.
3/21/2014 c1 5Tyrant Yoshitsuna
I am officially interested. I'd like to see how Shirou grows with these people around
5Tyrant YoshitsunaI am officially interested. I'd like to see how Shirou grows with these people around
3/18/2014 c1 1EVA-Saiyajin
Interesting. Very interesting. Well written too. Pretty good characterization. Though, I would think the Masters would be on Servant levels. And there's the problem-cause they're not Servants. And let's not even get started on Hayato Furinji. I would recommend increasing the power tiers of the Nasuverse, so that the various martial artists of the HSDverse can fit in without being overly powerful.
1EVA-SaiyajinInteresting. Very interesting. Well written too. Pretty good characterization. Though, I would think the Masters would be on Servant levels. And there's the problem-cause they're not Servants. And let's not even get started on Hayato Furinji. I would recommend increasing the power tiers of the Nasuverse, so that the various martial artists of the HSDverse can fit in without being overly powerful.
3/11/2014 c1 73F-14 Tomcat Lover
I do hope you continue this as soon as feasibly possible. Maybe even have the Tiger of Fuyuki find out just how much further she has to go to be the best. Might even be a safe spot for her later on, when she finally gets fired and run out of Fuyuki.
I saw no errors as near as I can tell. So keep up the good work. What more can I say?
Besides that it is a very well made start with considerable attention to detail.
Though... Are they in Tokyo or still in Fuyuki?
73F-14 Tomcat LoverI do hope you continue this as soon as feasibly possible. Maybe even have the Tiger of Fuyuki find out just how much further she has to go to be the best. Might even be a safe spot for her later on, when she finally gets fired and run out of Fuyuki.
I saw no errors as near as I can tell. So keep up the good work. What more can I say?
Besides that it is a very well made start with considerable attention to detail.
Though... Are they in Tokyo or still in Fuyuki?
3/10/2014 c1 Hypothetical Spiritual Entity
This seems like an interesting idea, especially since it seems that Kiritsugu will be factoring into the beginning of it. At this point the masters don't seem to know about him, but I'm curious about what would be the end of a clash between these two wildly different philosophies of saving people (I'm not necessarily saying combat, mind you.). I'm also wondering how Shirou might turn out with the über-masters noticing how fundementally fucked up he is on the inside.
This seems like an interesting idea, especially since it seems that Kiritsugu will be factoring into the beginning of it. At this point the masters don't seem to know about him, but I'm curious about what would be the end of a clash between these two wildly different philosophies of saving people (I'm not necessarily saying combat, mind you.). I'm also wondering how Shirou might turn out with the über-masters noticing how fundementally fucked up he is on the inside.
3/10/2014 c1 2vodkaCanidae
Ooh! This story has a good premise xD Can't wait to see where this will lead to. Thanks for writing!
2vodkaCanidaeOoh! This story has a good premise xD Can't wait to see where this will lead to. Thanks for writing!
3/8/2014 c1 5Orchamus
OH hell yes, this is a good beginning. I'm excited to see what all you have planned for this, this type of crossover far too often gets stopped and left at the wayside, so I genuinely hope to see more of yours.
5OrchamusOH hell yes, this is a good beginning. I'm excited to see what all you have planned for this, this type of crossover far too often gets stopped and left at the wayside, so I genuinely hope to see more of yours.
3/7/2014 c1 Fierdin
Why is the only word that comes to mind when Shirou meets Shigure and Tochumaru Moe?
And this is awesome and you should feel awesome.
Why is the only word that comes to mind when Shirou meets Shigure and Tochumaru Moe?
And this is awesome and you should feel awesome.