for Harry's Messed Up Family9/24/2019 c1 
4RandomRavenclaw10
Yeeeess. Love the way you mirrored Rowling’s intro in hpps. Love it!
4RandomRavenclaw10Yeeeess. Love the way you mirrored Rowling’s intro in hpps. Love it!
7/9/2017 c6 Lw117149
Cool I look forward to it.
Cool I look forward to it.
7/7/2017 c1 9Zaidee Lighthart
I love the first chapter. But at this point, I am assuming that the other chapters have yet to be rewritten. I couldn't be happier if you do continue to rewrite this. The first chapter is great, but, I became very confused and slightly disappointed with the rest. Which is annoying because I love the idea of this story. I just can't stand first person view and some of the facts don't seem to match with the first chapter.
So I really can't wait to see you rewrite this and what you will change. Hopefully you'll update again soon and have the other updates finished. Keep up the good work.
9Zaidee LighthartI love the first chapter. But at this point, I am assuming that the other chapters have yet to be rewritten. I couldn't be happier if you do continue to rewrite this. The first chapter is great, but, I became very confused and slightly disappointed with the rest. Which is annoying because I love the idea of this story. I just can't stand first person view and some of the facts don't seem to match with the first chapter.
So I really can't wait to see you rewrite this and what you will change. Hopefully you'll update again soon and have the other updates finished. Keep up the good work.
7/7/2017 c1 Wayne Clark
He he he, sounds like this is going to be a fun story. Please keep it going. -
He he he, sounds like this is going to be a fun story. Please keep it going. -