for Damsel in Distress, Doctor!4/26/2014 c3 Piffzzz
That was sooooooooooo cute. The Doctor with a little girl awesome idea. Was Cassie in the Harry Potter series or was she just from your imagination?
That was sooooooooooo cute. The Doctor with a little girl awesome idea. Was Cassie in the Harry Potter series or was she just from your imagination?
4/3/2014 c3 OptimisticLady
Definitely a good decision to move it to the Harry Potter/Doctor Who crossover section!
You know, Cassie wasn't as snappy as you made her out to be in the group! I thought it was fair enough that she was a little bit jumpy around the Doctor, considering the fact she IS being sought after by her twisted cousin, after all.
Also your descriptions are lovely and detailed but NOT overly detailed that it ends up like Homer's Iliad and loses all meaning, so good job on that!
I liked the Doctor/Cassie interaction and I am definitely looking to the pet shop and all the guinea pigs in the next chapter! Good job, my lovely :3
Definitely a good decision to move it to the Harry Potter/Doctor Who crossover section!
You know, Cassie wasn't as snappy as you made her out to be in the group! I thought it was fair enough that she was a little bit jumpy around the Doctor, considering the fact she IS being sought after by her twisted cousin, after all.
Also your descriptions are lovely and detailed but NOT overly detailed that it ends up like Homer's Iliad and loses all meaning, so good job on that!
I liked the Doctor/Cassie interaction and I am definitely looking to the pet shop and all the guinea pigs in the next chapter! Good job, my lovely :3
4/2/2014 c3 
121MayFairy
firstly YAY for HP/DW crossover category!
oooh pretty room for Cassie me gusta
let’s face it option 2 is much much better
hmmm she’s lost her wand that is very very bad
BUNNY SOCKS YES I APPROVE
the Doctor complimenting her on her teeth lol
why is she so jumpy?
yay for fluff at the end!
Great chapter hun, hope your day is better! :) xx
121MayFairyfirstly YAY for HP/DW crossover category!
oooh pretty room for Cassie me gusta
let’s face it option 2 is much much better
hmmm she’s lost her wand that is very very bad
BUNNY SOCKS YES I APPROVE
the Doctor complimenting her on her teeth lol
why is she so jumpy?
yay for fluff at the end!
Great chapter hun, hope your day is better! :) xx
4/2/2014 c3 ysghjhksuup9ds
yay! aw that was cute - i enjoyed the exchange between the doctor and cassie and i am excited for pet shops!
yay! aw that was cute - i enjoyed the exchange between the doctor and cassie and i am excited for pet shops!
3/19/2014 c2 3ZackAttack96
I liked it! Reading some of the other reviews, I take the point about the truth potion thing, but she's a girl! It's a perfectly logical thing for a girl to say. Admittedly, you can't really drink truth potions. I'm glad you resisted the urge to make it one of the amazing ones that actually force you to tell the truth - real truth serums like sodium pentothal relax you such as yours did.
Anyway, minor detail. It was a good chapter - it's one of those necessary 'foundation' chapters that set the scene for the rest of the story. So nicely done. Looking forward to the next one!
3ZackAttack96I liked it! Reading some of the other reviews, I take the point about the truth potion thing, but she's a girl! It's a perfectly logical thing for a girl to say. Admittedly, you can't really drink truth potions. I'm glad you resisted the urge to make it one of the amazing ones that actually force you to tell the truth - real truth serums like sodium pentothal relax you such as yours did.
Anyway, minor detail. It was a good chapter - it's one of those necessary 'foundation' chapters that set the scene for the rest of the story. So nicely done. Looking forward to the next one!
3/18/2014 c2 4thyrandomninja
You've got Eleven's character perfectly.
I'm noticing a lot of errors in grammar dotted about - it could do with a quick once-over.
I'm enjoying it so far, and can't wait until you get to the main meat of the story. Keep it up.
TRN
4thyrandomninjaYou've got Eleven's character perfectly.
I'm noticing a lot of errors in grammar dotted about - it could do with a quick once-over.
I'm enjoying it so far, and can't wait until you get to the main meat of the story. Keep it up.
TRN
3/18/2014 c2 121MayFairy
Okay I'll be honest, the truth potion seems really out of the blue I mean it makes sense in how she trusts him after but like where did it come from and calling it a potion I'll be super honest sounds kinda dumb?
Still a great chapter with some great stuff, just trying to help out. :P
121MayFairyOkay I'll be honest, the truth potion seems really out of the blue I mean it makes sense in how she trusts him after but like where did it come from and calling it a potion I'll be super honest sounds kinda dumb?
Still a great chapter with some great stuff, just trying to help out. :P
3/17/2014 c2 ysghjhksuup9ds
i am very much enjoying this, and your character certainly isnt a mary sue, i dont know why you think she is
keep up the good work, lovely!
i am very much enjoying this, and your character certainly isnt a mary sue, i dont know why you think she is
keep up the good work, lovely!
3/17/2014 c2 OptimisticLady
Oooohhh I liked this very much!
Although I think that Cassie was a little bit TOO fierce, considering that we barely know her. I think her slapping the Doctor was a little bit out of the question - perhaps something saved for a later chapter, when we get to know her better along with her and the Doctor's relationship?
Other than that, I enjoyed the Grand Canyon scene and the Doctor drinking the Veritaserum! :3
Oooohhh I liked this very much!
Although I think that Cassie was a little bit TOO fierce, considering that we barely know her. I think her slapping the Doctor was a little bit out of the question - perhaps something saved for a later chapter, when we get to know her better along with her and the Doctor's relationship?
Other than that, I enjoyed the Grand Canyon scene and the Doctor drinking the Veritaserum! :3
3/4/2014 c1 3ZackAttack96
Aww this is brilliant! I like this a lot. A lot a lot! I love the way you subtly blended humour into the action and drama without spoiling the flow. It made me properly laugh out loud.
So excellent work! Keep it up!
3ZackAttack96Aww this is brilliant! I like this a lot. A lot a lot! I love the way you subtly blended humour into the action and drama without spoiling the flow. It made me properly laugh out loud.
So excellent work! Keep it up!
3/2/2014 c1 121MayFairy
THIS IS ACTUALLY SO GREAT OMG
I have too many good things to say about this where do I start hmm
okay it's written really really well your writing style is tres good
you've given us just enough about the girl to make us curious, and given us a great idea of her personality already without delving into her looks just yet
you seem to have started the story in just the right place, so kudos for that
Amelia god Amelia she's great I can't wait to see more of her
THE LAST LINE THOUGH THAT'S THE BEST BIT OF IT
Also you have Eleven down to a T just wow congrats on that I think you do him a bit better than me I tend to make him a tad too serious
*bows down to fab story*
121MayFairyTHIS IS ACTUALLY SO GREAT OMG
I have too many good things to say about this where do I start hmm
okay it's written really really well your writing style is tres good
you've given us just enough about the girl to make us curious, and given us a great idea of her personality already without delving into her looks just yet
you seem to have started the story in just the right place, so kudos for that
Amelia god Amelia she's great I can't wait to see more of her
THE LAST LINE THOUGH THAT'S THE BEST BIT OF IT
Also you have Eleven down to a T just wow congrats on that I think you do him a bit better than me I tend to make him a tad too serious
*bows down to fab story*
3/1/2014 c1 OptimisticLady
I REMEMBER THIS!
You showed it to me last year!
It's a crossover, isn't it? Anyway, I liked it! :3
I REMEMBER THIS!
You showed it to me last year!
It's a crossover, isn't it? Anyway, I liked it! :3