for Dead4/12/2022 c5 Guest
Poetry isn't my think
Poetry isn't my think
4/11/2022 c5 Guest
these poems are ok but I just couldn't get into them, nothing personal
these poems are ok but I just couldn't get into them, nothing personal
12/4/2021 c1 Nathalia.Cassiopeia
I enjoyed this riddle.
Black as tar
Will go far
As everything stops
And Heaven flops
I enjoyed this riddle.
Black as tar
Will go far
As everything stops
And Heaven flops
3/2/2017 c4 IAmReallyTired
This is pretty good, and deep, and sad, which I love :) it would be nice if they were longer, but it's your choice ;)
I have one too (probably won't ryhme though):
Stars above
Shining like a million diamonds
And I'm floating up
Becoming one
Saying goodbye to the others
Stars
I think we all know who this is... :'(
This is pretty good, and deep, and sad, which I love :) it would be nice if they were longer, but it's your choice ;)
I have one too (probably won't ryhme though):
Stars above
Shining like a million diamonds
And I'm floating up
Becoming one
Saying goodbye to the others
Stars
I think we all know who this is... :'(
2/22/2017 c4 The 100th Guest
I'm going to cry... :( These poems are so sad, and they're really good. I feel so bad for the dead. :( You're pretty good at this writing. :)
I'm going to cry... :( These poems are so sad, and they're really good. I feel so bad for the dead. :( You're pretty good at this writing. :)
9/24/2014 c2 crinj
interesting.
I reckon you could get more reviews by making the summary more interesting, and also elaborating a bit more
interesting.
I reckon you could get more reviews by making the summary more interesting, and also elaborating a bit more
9/10/2014 c1 
1aVerySadBean
I love it! I changed I a bit and write it down for myself:
Covered in white
A snow like bed
But something is wrong
I am bathed in red.
I like yours to
1aVerySadBeanI love it! I changed I a bit and write it down for myself:
Covered in white
A snow like bed
But something is wrong
I am bathed in red.
I like yours to
3/1/2014 c1 Hmmmmm
Intresting. Care to elaborate?
Intresting. Care to elaborate?