
3/11/2018 c2 Guest
more I want more like this I found no stories like this except ashikabi of hanger
more I want more like this I found no stories like this except ashikabi of hanger
7/25/2016 c2 M3rkxMusic
Keep going
Keep going
5/21/2016 c2 M3rkxMusic
Keep going plz its great idea
Keep going plz its great idea
4/18/2016 c2 M3rkxMusic
Keep going
Keep going
3/3/2016 c2 Akuma-Heika
who ran at speeds that made sure he wouldn't be spotted by cameras,
depends on the camera. Some of them can record to nanoseconds.
Looked up Angelo Fortunato and Mac Gargan they look the same to me…or pretty damn close as well as what I know of as Venom…unless the first one is some character not shown in any of the Spiderman shows made in the last 30 years and looks very different from what I know of as Venom.
I hope you continue your fics! I think someone was inspired by is one since I read a Kill la Kill xover that is similar in principle.
who ran at speeds that made sure he wouldn't be spotted by cameras,
depends on the camera. Some of them can record to nanoseconds.
Looked up Angelo Fortunato and Mac Gargan they look the same to me…or pretty damn close as well as what I know of as Venom…unless the first one is some character not shown in any of the Spiderman shows made in the last 30 years and looks very different from what I know of as Venom.
I hope you continue your fics! I think someone was inspired by is one since I read a Kill la Kill xover that is similar in principle.
7/10/2015 c2
16Doctor Snake Eater
I love me a good original Symbiote design, even he's named Venom as well. Magnus is so dead.

I love me a good original Symbiote design, even he's named Venom as well. Magnus is so dead.
6/7/2014 c2
8DeathDemonWolf
Okay. ..Please write more of this amazing work also I don't care if there is a romantic interest just please write you a sexy author

Okay. ..Please write more of this amazing work also I don't care if there is a romantic interest just please write you a sexy author
5/23/2014 c2
27Angelus-v1
Again, good job here. It seems you have the characters down pretty good. One thing though, if it were me, I would avoid adding curse words during discriptive paragraphs such as when you described 'Fucking Laser Cannons' unless a character think or says it. It's up to you, but it just sounds as if the story switches to a firs person view. What you have here is a good story and good spot for your other character join in with a bang.

Again, good job here. It seems you have the characters down pretty good. One thing though, if it were me, I would avoid adding curse words during discriptive paragraphs such as when you described 'Fucking Laser Cannons' unless a character think or says it. It's up to you, but it just sounds as if the story switches to a firs person view. What you have here is a good story and good spot for your other character join in with a bang.
5/23/2014 c2 Scam Man
Interesting how you turned the Xavier Institute into a Cadmus facility and had Xavier a scientist with an actual conscience. Also, it's a nice change of pace using a new character to bond with Venom, it gets boring if you just retell the story of an already existing character, it's so fresh and garners the chance of making a connection with the new character. Keep up the good work.
Interesting how you turned the Xavier Institute into a Cadmus facility and had Xavier a scientist with an actual conscience. Also, it's a nice change of pace using a new character to bond with Venom, it gets boring if you just retell the story of an already existing character, it's so fresh and garners the chance of making a connection with the new character. Keep up the good work.
5/18/2014 c2 pewdiepie
don't kick Megan to the side man, that not cool. Beside that this story seems to be coming along well.
keep up the good work.
don't kick Megan to the side man, that not cool. Beside that this story seems to be coming along well.
keep up the good work.
5/17/2014 c2
64mellra
Nice little cameo of Felicia Hardy aka Black Cat and Jean Grey, as well as mentioning Scott Summers (Cyclopse) and his brother. Guessing there's also going to be a little Iron Patriot later on, just in time for Memorial Day! This story's really good so far and I can't wait to see more! Wonder if Venom/Will's going to join the YJ team or no? Keep up the amazing work!

Nice little cameo of Felicia Hardy aka Black Cat and Jean Grey, as well as mentioning Scott Summers (Cyclopse) and his brother. Guessing there's also going to be a little Iron Patriot later on, just in time for Memorial Day! This story's really good so far and I can't wait to see more! Wonder if Venom/Will's going to join the YJ team or no? Keep up the amazing work!
4/27/2014 c1 Cf96
Cool
Cool