for The Sins of the Father3/31/2014 c4 
18aliceann
I'm a complete sucker for hurt Neal and protective Peter, great chapter. Looking forward to your next chapter.
18aliceannI'm a complete sucker for hurt Neal and protective Peter, great chapter. Looking forward to your next chapter.
3/28/2014 c4 daisesndaffidols
I'm glad that Anderson got what was coming to him. and that maybe Neal realizes that he can confide in Peter
I'm glad that Anderson got what was coming to him. and that maybe Neal realizes that he can confide in Peter
3/28/2014 c3 daisesndaffidols
I really don't like this Anderson guy.. He says that Neal's father was a dirty cop!? But he's just as bad! I hope Peter either catches him in the act.. or Neal tells him the truth
I really don't like this Anderson guy.. He says that Neal's father was a dirty cop!? But he's just as bad! I hope Peter either catches him in the act.. or Neal tells him the truth
3/25/2014 c3 Guest
Does this story have a point or just beat up Neal?. I figured you had dropped the story so glad that you started it up but it needs and ending.
Does this story have a point or just beat up Neal?. I figured you had dropped the story so glad that you started it up but it needs and ending.
3/25/2014 c3 caseylf123
Welcome back. I'm hoping the next chapter is going to involve some TLC (tender loving care), because Neal sure could use some.
Welcome back. I'm hoping the next chapter is going to involve some TLC (tender loving care), because Neal sure could use some.
3/3/2014 c1 Anon
Good start; i love protective peter :D
Good start; i love protective peter :D
3/4/2014 c2 caseylf123
Thank goodness at least El is being observant-despite the fact she is partly to blame for Neal being in the position he's in. Now maybe Peter will get to the bottom of things.
Thank goodness at least El is being observant-despite the fact she is partly to blame for Neal being in the position he's in. Now maybe Peter will get to the bottom of things.
3/3/2014 c1 2ocgirl.fr
Liking the plot so far, I would gladly read more :)
For a translated story, the writing is quite good. Maybe you could try to ask for a beta for the next chapters to correct a few mistakes? Cheers !
2ocgirl.frLiking the plot so far, I would gladly read more :)
For a translated story, the writing is quite good. Maybe you could try to ask for a beta for the next chapters to correct a few mistakes? Cheers !
3/2/2014 c1 caseylf123
Enjoying the story. You're doing a great job. Looking forward to the next chapter. LOVE protective Peter.
Enjoying the story. You're doing a great job. Looking forward to the next chapter. LOVE protective Peter.