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6/7/2020 c1 animeraccoon1
Please update! Its so exciting!
4/18/2020 c3 rexcalifrahero
Goods story I like it so much
there's no other chapter?
3/11/2016 c3 Mika
Chapter 4 I Need It Love Your Work Make Some More And Keep Up With The Good Work
6/23/2015 c3 kamdyn lackey
you got gwen from queen of knights and please continue
6/17/2015 c3 Manny McTurdeson
Keep this story going! That cliffhanger ending really got to me...looks like Louise isn't the only magic user in town...

I also like how the story fits in with some of the clips shown during the finale credits. The final clip shows Saito ringing his parents' doorbell with Louise by his side. Hayate very well could've been standing somewhere behind them off-screen...
6/17/2015 c1 Manny McTurdeson
Goof: Delfringer's physical form was already destroyed, but Saito somehow managed to pulled him out on the train...
6/14/2015 c3 Guest
Dark souls
4/18/2015 c3 5Reader Of Fate
If you are still witeing this story the scene was good and so is the story
12/4/2014 c3 A
Gwen and the four knights are from Dark Souls, It didn't really register until he said pygmy.
11/25/2014 c3 Gavin Kummler
King author
5/8/2014 c3 2TitanicFabri
I love the story! :) I actually finished the last season of the anime today and I was looking for a fanfic that is like a 5th season of it, 'cause I really LOVED it! I think this one is great! But you can't stop updating the story with this cliffhanger! Please continue! I LOVE YOUR STORY, PLEASE GIVE ME MORE ;P
4/30/2014 c3 Guest
Awesome story. There isn't much stories like this where the setting is when Saito took Louise to his world. Looking forward to the next chapter.
4/22/2014 c3 Louise Valliere
Ommg you finally updated! I love this story so far, please keep updating!
4/22/2014 c3 Aretheus
I love this character Hayate, but he doesn't seem to have a hard personality set in stone yet so if you could flesh out his traits a little that would be great. Otherwise I love how you tie everything together almost in a pretty bow.
4/22/2014 c3 jamiemartin1
Awesomeness
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