for Uzumaki4/4/2021 c1 jellatinous
aww this is so cute. I kinda avoided this because the title reminded me of a certain horror manga, but this thing pulls you in from chapter 1!
aww this is so cute. I kinda avoided this because the title reminded me of a certain horror manga, but this thing pulls you in from chapter 1!
3/2/2021 c29 BearGlitch
Why did you decide to write everyone to be angsty dcks to Naruto? Is it a fetish? Especially Sakura wanting to literally scar him, what an absolute pyschopath you have written.
Why did you decide to write everyone to be angsty dcks to Naruto? Is it a fetish? Especially Sakura wanting to literally scar him, what an absolute pyschopath you have written.
3/2/2021 c13 BearGlitch
Jeez seriously could you make Sakura any more of an unbearable fangirl and cnt?
Jeez seriously could you make Sakura any more of an unbearable fangirl and cnt?
3/2/2021 c3 Ghost
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2/19/2021 c7 Guest
Naruto the person
Naruto the plant
Naruto the bridge
Naruto the person
Naruto the plant
Naruto the bridge
22/9/2021 c44 Yolo1509
It was a good fic, I liked it, at first, although afterwards everything changed a lot, moments in which the story advanced a lot,what I liked the most were the original moments of your fic, the moments of naruto and tsuki, it is one of my favorite ships,Although I think it was wrong to take several of his moments from Naruto, it was almost a copy and paste of the original story, only sometimes it was tsuki or sakura who took those moments, that atrophied your naruto a bit, and that helped the story to stagnate at various times, although well, I think it is an abandoned story, it is a bad thing that the naru tsuki did not advance further, or had an indication of where it was going firmly,It shows that in the end you ended up developing other characters a lot, in this case your sakura and tsuki, your naruto ended up very abandoned, it was something sad that naruto ended up as he started,I did not learn anything, it depended a lot on the power of kurama, I ended up being a secondary character that you used to develop others, I thought that the uzumaki apedillo would have more weight considering the name of the story, in the final chapters too much drama with the feelings and little progress in the plot, I missed the fluffy parts of the tsukinaru, it was what deluded me in the story
It was a good fic, I liked it, at first, although afterwards everything changed a lot, moments in which the story advanced a lot,what I liked the most were the original moments of your fic, the moments of naruto and tsuki, it is one of my favorite ships,Although I think it was wrong to take several of his moments from Naruto, it was almost a copy and paste of the original story, only sometimes it was tsuki or sakura who took those moments, that atrophied your naruto a bit, and that helped the story to stagnate at various times, although well, I think it is an abandoned story, it is a bad thing that the naru tsuki did not advance further, or had an indication of where it was going firmly,It shows that in the end you ended up developing other characters a lot, in this case your sakura and tsuki, your naruto ended up very abandoned, it was something sad that naruto ended up as he started,I did not learn anything, it depended a lot on the power of kurama, I ended up being a secondary character that you used to develop others, I thought that the uzumaki apedillo would have more weight considering the name of the story, in the final chapters too much drama with the feelings and little progress in the plot, I missed the fluffy parts of the tsukinaru, it was what deluded me in the story
2/7/2021 c44 Raeger
An ambitious re-imagination of the series with its characters cast in different roles. It did feel really jarring to have Satsuki slip away from her friendships with the other two after the encounter with Itachi at Tanzaku Gai. I'm not too much a fan of amnesia as a plot device, and while you're giving us glimpses of wider forces at work (presumably with Root and the mysterious scenes with Owl / Rabbit / Lizard that don't really tell us much), I did wonder whether all this is just a convenient tool to normalise the relationships between Team 7.
Anyway, very much enjoyed the read. It certainly gets better as the characters grow on you - I find myself quite keen on reading more on a mellower Satsuki who is growing quietly affectionate of her genin team, of a Naruto who still has bits of that knuckleheaded ninja in blowing up Orochimaru's base with fireworks and pranking people with Kabuto's face.
Although when I put it like that, it does get me thinking - what's Sakura doing again? - which is a bit woeful when the realisation hits, like ah Sakura is being left behind again. Not to say that you've shown us nothing of her, after all she's starting to get her memories back, and it's a nice tie-back a previous promise when Satsuki chats with Mebuki and promises to take care of Sakura. But yeah, the amnesia thing mixed together with her general regression socially makes Sakura's character feel like she's been running in place while the others have been acquiring nuances.
Also, considering that Sakura has a bigger significance to Tsunade in this story, as the one who convinced her to start healing again (and maybe even stay longer?), it might have been good to catch glimpses (maybe through expressions of familiarity that taper off into sadness) of how hard the loss of that important relationship has been for Tsunade. Both to show us more of Sakura's growth as a shinobi across the past few years, and also to show us more about these two characters, and their relationship with one another / others.
Random ideas / feedback aside, keep up the good work!
An ambitious re-imagination of the series with its characters cast in different roles. It did feel really jarring to have Satsuki slip away from her friendships with the other two after the encounter with Itachi at Tanzaku Gai. I'm not too much a fan of amnesia as a plot device, and while you're giving us glimpses of wider forces at work (presumably with Root and the mysterious scenes with Owl / Rabbit / Lizard that don't really tell us much), I did wonder whether all this is just a convenient tool to normalise the relationships between Team 7.
Anyway, very much enjoyed the read. It certainly gets better as the characters grow on you - I find myself quite keen on reading more on a mellower Satsuki who is growing quietly affectionate of her genin team, of a Naruto who still has bits of that knuckleheaded ninja in blowing up Orochimaru's base with fireworks and pranking people with Kabuto's face.
Although when I put it like that, it does get me thinking - what's Sakura doing again? - which is a bit woeful when the realisation hits, like ah Sakura is being left behind again. Not to say that you've shown us nothing of her, after all she's starting to get her memories back, and it's a nice tie-back a previous promise when Satsuki chats with Mebuki and promises to take care of Sakura. But yeah, the amnesia thing mixed together with her general regression socially makes Sakura's character feel like she's been running in place while the others have been acquiring nuances.
Also, considering that Sakura has a bigger significance to Tsunade in this story, as the one who convinced her to start healing again (and maybe even stay longer?), it might have been good to catch glimpses (maybe through expressions of familiarity that taper off into sadness) of how hard the loss of that important relationship has been for Tsunade. Both to show us more of Sakura's growth as a shinobi across the past few years, and also to show us more about these two characters, and their relationship with one another / others.
Random ideas / feedback aside, keep up the good work!