for Uzumaki12/9/2020 c44 NB132
I gotta say my dude/dudeette, that this naruto is the most wonderful missing nin naruto I ever read, he's beautifully compelling and likeable, yet his mistakes are numerous and his friends call him on it. Kimimmaro was a surprise, but a really good one. Satsuki is interesting too, how rational she is is a massive comfort, and the fact she wants to drag naruto back is realistically done, as are her grudges. I'm also REALLY curious about how naruto and kakashi meet up will go because I have no idea how he will react. I really hope you write more fam
I gotta say my dude/dudeette, that this naruto is the most wonderful missing nin naruto I ever read, he's beautifully compelling and likeable, yet his mistakes are numerous and his friends call him on it. Kimimmaro was a surprise, but a really good one. Satsuki is interesting too, how rational she is is a massive comfort, and the fact she wants to drag naruto back is realistically done, as are her grudges. I'm also REALLY curious about how naruto and kakashi meet up will go because I have no idea how he will react. I really hope you write more fam
12/8/2020 c1 Guest
The summary made me believe this was a fluffy fic... then I got an angst filled drama fest filled with Sasuke wanking. On a related note the fandom needs more Naruto x fem Sasuke fics. My main problem with the story is that you been filling angst in it for no reason. The story was great until the chunin exams and then you just started dragging it. That’s not to say you’re a bad writer, not at all, but there was just too much angst and bias towards Sasuke for me to personally get into it. Also I personally didn’t like how you nerfed Naruto, although that could just be because I love Naruto and prefer him to be strong in fics. The humor is very well done though!
The summary made me believe this was a fluffy fic... then I got an angst filled drama fest filled with Sasuke wanking. On a related note the fandom needs more Naruto x fem Sasuke fics. My main problem with the story is that you been filling angst in it for no reason. The story was great until the chunin exams and then you just started dragging it. That’s not to say you’re a bad writer, not at all, but there was just too much angst and bias towards Sasuke for me to personally get into it. Also I personally didn’t like how you nerfed Naruto, although that could just be because I love Naruto and prefer him to be strong in fics. The humor is very well done though!
12/3/2020 c1 Guest
I love eating tomatoes like an apple. Yes, it's messy. But it's worth it.
Anyway, I'm enjoying the story so far
I love eating tomatoes like an apple. Yes, it's messy. But it's worth it.
Anyway, I'm enjoying the story so far
11/23/2020 c44 
1copet
After such a battle against Akatsuki, I hoped to know how they got away. Now I appreciate this calm moments that explain what problems Naruto carry with him and what is happening to Sakura (by some meassure of uncovering a little of the mystery)... Now what is left after Naruto burns all of Orochimaru's bases? What if there isn't anything to fill anything for him? I really can't imagine him being all that well after years of torture from Orochimaru, but somehow he knows how to look a little bit normal now. I think that was the first time Kimimaro was able to see some of Naruto's problems, but I just hope for something better still. Great chapters! Have a great day!
1copetAfter such a battle against Akatsuki, I hoped to know how they got away. Now I appreciate this calm moments that explain what problems Naruto carry with him and what is happening to Sakura (by some meassure of uncovering a little of the mystery)... Now what is left after Naruto burns all of Orochimaru's bases? What if there isn't anything to fill anything for him? I really can't imagine him being all that well after years of torture from Orochimaru, but somehow he knows how to look a little bit normal now. I think that was the first time Kimimaro was able to see some of Naruto's problems, but I just hope for something better still. Great chapters! Have a great day!
11/18/2020 c1 Chris
This was pretty good Sakura is even more useless than in original.
This was pretty good Sakura is even more useless than in original.
11/5/2020 c44 Nii
You know what the fact that you depicted children being children is the best thing. As much as I ship it Satsuki/Naruto or any of the pairings in Naruto who have potential would are weird if depicted in canon because the characters are so young even after the time skip.
I wonder what is gonna happen now that Naruto is not there to stop Nagato from destroying Konoha, and if he will maybe Jiraya can train him properly after that
You know what the fact that you depicted children being children is the best thing. As much as I ship it Satsuki/Naruto or any of the pairings in Naruto who have potential would are weird if depicted in canon because the characters are so young even after the time skip.
I wonder what is gonna happen now that Naruto is not there to stop Nagato from destroying Konoha, and if he will maybe Jiraya can train him properly after that
11/4/2020 c43 ITACHI why
Strawberries, with sugar.
Strawberries, with sugar.
11/4/2020 c44 Guest
Oh man. Sakura's memories of Naruto. Intense flashback! and more Naruto:)
Oh man. Sakura's memories of Naruto. Intense flashback! and more Naruto:)
10/27/2020 c44 Angelo47
So is naruto going to seek uzushiogakura no sato, and learn some cool sealing techniques!? That would be awesome!
Even though naruto isn’t seeking to be Hokage’s I appreciate how when it comes down to it naruto cares for his friends opinions and wellbeing’s above his own!?
I hope Naruto and Sakura reconcile there differences, in a non-lethal manner!
Keep up the good work, this story is great!
So is naruto going to seek uzushiogakura no sato, and learn some cool sealing techniques!? That would be awesome!
Even though naruto isn’t seeking to be Hokage’s I appreciate how when it comes down to it naruto cares for his friends opinions and wellbeing’s above his own!?
I hope Naruto and Sakura reconcile there differences, in a non-lethal manner!
Keep up the good work, this story is great!