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18Kaisha Agariba Hiniku
... The strangest food I've ever eaten would have to be... hmm... I'd have to say... Pidgeon. It's rather odd cause before then, Pidgeons wanted nothing to do with me, and now at work, they flock to me like I'm one of their own. It's weird. Oh well.. not gonna look into it too much. Really looking forward to the Satsuki x Naruto scenes. But, scenes like these are good too.
18Kaisha Agariba Hiniku... The strangest food I've ever eaten would have to be... hmm... I'd have to say... Pidgeon. It's rather odd cause before then, Pidgeons wanted nothing to do with me, and now at work, they flock to me like I'm one of their own. It's weird. Oh well.. not gonna look into it too much. Really looking forward to the Satsuki x Naruto scenes. But, scenes like these are good too.
9/23/2020 c44 Brenda Joyeux1
Does that mean that Naruto would eventually turns against Konohagakure in a near future ?
Does that mean that Naruto would eventually turns against Konohagakure in a near future ?
9/22/2020 c44 muis 10
Hm, weiredest food? I don't think I've had any food considered "weird", to be honest!
Hm, weiredest food? I don't think I've had any food considered "weird", to be honest!
9/21/2020 c44 5NatssuDRAG
No puedo esperar para el siguiente capítulo, me encantó! Tu historia me inspira a seguir escribiendo y mejorando, sigue asi!
5NatssuDRAGNo puedo esperar para el siguiente capítulo, me encantó! Tu historia me inspira a seguir escribiendo y mejorando, sigue asi!
9/21/2020 c5 29Birch Banterous
I like my eggs dippy in the yolks, so I can dip my toast in it.
This story puts me in a happy, nostalgic mood. I usually don't go for gender-bend stories, but the unique take on the Iruka-and-Mizuki switch is intriguing.
29Birch BanterousI like my eggs dippy in the yolks, so I can dip my toast in it.
This story puts me in a happy, nostalgic mood. I usually don't go for gender-bend stories, but the unique take on the Iruka-and-Mizuki switch is intriguing.
9/21/2020 c44 2NYC01234
Just checked out the concept art and I have to say, it's pretty incredible. Honestly, I'm surprised that you aren't using one of them as your cover, considering how talented you seem to be. Though, I won't lie, there's something really nice about the plainness of a single color lol. Anyway, keep up the good work!
2NYC01234Just checked out the concept art and I have to say, it's pretty incredible. Honestly, I'm surprised that you aren't using one of them as your cover, considering how talented you seem to be. Though, I won't lie, there's something really nice about the plainness of a single color lol. Anyway, keep up the good work!
9/21/2020 c44 Mon
Great stuff. Kimmy boy using those armor piercing words to get through Naru's thick skull. The jaded Karin trying to kill whatever little sunshine left in him. Juugo playing peace keeper. What a rag tag bunch of misfits. It be great. Also being Sakura is suffering. Why you do this?
Great stuff. Kimmy boy using those armor piercing words to get through Naru's thick skull. The jaded Karin trying to kill whatever little sunshine left in him. Juugo playing peace keeper. What a rag tag bunch of misfits. It be great. Also being Sakura is suffering. Why you do this?
9/21/2020 c44 Tauf
Taro root, not that strange. but that's about all I have on my strange culinary palate.
Taro root, not that strange. but that's about all I have on my strange culinary palate.
9/21/2020 c44 AkashimaUchiha
Nice flow of pace, Naruto is searching for another person/something to blame or to fight against. Wonder if this Naruto will look for Jiraiya's peace (or any form of it) from outside of any village. That'll be another new path that few have written/explored. Looking forward for another chapter. Can't wait for the reunion.
Nice flow of pace, Naruto is searching for another person/something to blame or to fight against. Wonder if this Naruto will look for Jiraiya's peace (or any form of it) from outside of any village. That'll be another new path that few have written/explored. Looking forward for another chapter. Can't wait for the reunion.
9/21/2020 c44 IncessantNovember
I think one thing I really like about this story is that these characters feel like real people, rather than a collection of walking talking clichés shaped like a person like in most fanfics.
I think one thing I really like about this story is that these characters feel like real people, rather than a collection of walking talking clichés shaped like a person like in most fanfics.
9/21/2020 c44 Ares1418
Pig tail, the texture was weird.
Nice chapter, still one of the best writing I've ever seen.
Pig tail, the texture was weird.
Nice chapter, still one of the best writing I've ever seen.
9/21/2020 c44 Guest
This Naruto is way too weaker when compared to his canon counterpart at the same age... Which makes no sense
This Naruto is way too weaker when compared to his canon counterpart at the same age... Which makes no sense
9/21/2020 c44 Guest
This is getting really, REALLY boring..
This is getting really, REALLY boring..
9/20/2020 c44 IndianaJohhney
Octopus was really off putting for me. I'm glad stuff is moving for Sakura I suppose. I'm really glad someone called Naruto on his shit. It is upsetting that his buds are mad at him.
Octopus was really off putting for me. I'm glad stuff is moving for Sakura I suppose. I'm really glad someone called Naruto on his shit. It is upsetting that his buds are mad at him.