for Uzumaki3/12/2014 c3 Legion's Gurdian
Wow. I seriously wasn't expecting that.
Did Mizuki really care about him or was he just playing him?
Great chapter though.
Wow. I seriously wasn't expecting that.
Did Mizuki really care about him or was he just playing him?
Great chapter though.
3/12/2014 c3 
16Duesal Bladesinger
O_O
Well... That was unexpected. Naruto ALREADY harbors thoughts of treason. Or at the very least, the seeds have been planted before he even started his career. AND Iruka-sensei doesn't matter NEARLY as much as he did in canon.
16Duesal BladesingerO_O
Well... That was unexpected. Naruto ALREADY harbors thoughts of treason. Or at the very least, the seeds have been planted before he even started his career. AND Iruka-sensei doesn't matter NEARLY as much as he did in canon.
3/12/2014 c3 Friaku
Now THAT was a surprise. A nice Mizuki who actually cared? Bravo to you on that. Another well written chappy and I look forward to seeing more in the future
Best regards
Friaku
Now THAT was a surprise. A nice Mizuki who actually cared? Bravo to you on that. Another well written chappy and I look forward to seeing more in the future
Best regards
Friaku
3/12/2014 c3 La Belle Coeur
This Mizuki is something that canon Iruka shoud have been like.
Great chapter, nice plot setting
This Mizuki is something that canon Iruka shoud have been like.
Great chapter, nice plot setting
3/12/2014 c3 ShadowRave876
I really liked this chapter and your version of Mizuki, he sounded nicer than the original Iruka with the whole helping him train for the exams. Is it cuz of Mizuki's death that Naruto will start turning Dark?
Great work and update soon!:D
I really liked this chapter and your version of Mizuki, he sounded nicer than the original Iruka with the whole helping him train for the exams. Is it cuz of Mizuki's death that Naruto will start turning Dark?
Great work and update soon!:D
3/12/2014 c3 10Ser Serendipity
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Damn it.
GODDAMMIT.
You know what you've fucking done?!
You've kicked open Pandora's bloody box. You've pushed aside the headstones. You've unlatched the gate.
Feel things wait beyond, baying and snorting, cackling in mad glee with shined pointed teeth and gimlet eyes, gleaming in the light of a thousand stripped bones.
THIS IS NOT GOING TO GO WELL.
10Ser Serendipity...
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Damn it.
GODDAMMIT.
You know what you've fucking done?!
You've kicked open Pandora's bloody box. You've pushed aside the headstones. You've unlatched the gate.
Feel things wait beyond, baying and snorting, cackling in mad glee with shined pointed teeth and gimlet eyes, gleaming in the light of a thousand stripped bones.
THIS IS NOT GOING TO GO WELL.
3/9/2014 c2 16Duesal Bladesinger
You're pretty damn good at writing, so I think I'd like just about ANYTHING you came up with.
16Duesal BladesingerYou're pretty damn good at writing, so I think I'd like just about ANYTHING you came up with.
3/9/2014 c1 Duesal Bladesinger
This is gold. There really is nothing else that I can say.
Truly, good job.
This is gold. There really is nothing else that I can say.
Truly, good job.
3/8/2014 c2 Legion's Gurdian
So sasuke is opening up to naruto a bit.
I can't wait for the next chapter.
Keep up the good work!
So sasuke is opening up to naruto a bit.
I can't wait for the next chapter.
Keep up the good work!