7/26/2020 c9 Mystery889
I gotta say I don’t like what you did to naruto a character he’s not even really naruto at this point his fire is gone
I gotta say I don’t like what you did to naruto a character he’s not even really naruto at this point his fire is gone
7/25/2020 c42 6Boar Rushes Down The Mountain
Damn, what a fight. Canon-based knowledge of Itachi's motives makes this conversation more interesting to view from his perspective than Naruto's. Very cool. Like some others, I'm interested to see Karin (awake, that is).
I'm a tempura veggie kind of guy.
Damn, what a fight. Canon-based knowledge of Itachi's motives makes this conversation more interesting to view from his perspective than Naruto's. Very cool. Like some others, I'm interested to see Karin (awake, that is).
I'm a tempura veggie kind of guy.
7/25/2020 c11 Shifuru
Seal on a seal. That ought be certain death already or at least one or both seals becoming defunct, thus causing either Minato or Kushina's chakra imprint to appear already.
And the Kyuubi not appearing or even shown vying for control? ... Oookay.
Plot holes, I think, right here. Too many in fact since the first chapter.
While I did enjoy reading this, the events with the characters is just practically a role switch and I suppose it's not my cup of tea even though I enjoyed how they interacted with one another.
Seal on a seal. That ought be certain death already or at least one or both seals becoming defunct, thus causing either Minato or Kushina's chakra imprint to appear already.
And the Kyuubi not appearing or even shown vying for control? ... Oookay.
Plot holes, I think, right here. Too many in fact since the first chapter.
While I did enjoy reading this, the events with the characters is just practically a role switch and I suppose it's not my cup of tea even though I enjoyed how they interacted with one another.
7/22/2020 c42 Guest
Heyy this was lit! Thank you for the very interesting story. Please continue on!
Heyy this was lit! Thank you for the very interesting story. Please continue on!
7/20/2020 c42 Tauf
I don't really like deep fried anything, not only do I dislike the taste but I'm also a bit of a health buff... But if I had to try a deep fried food I would love to try deep fried peaches. They probably wouldn't taste all that great but hey, it's something at least (;
I don't really like deep fried anything, not only do I dislike the taste but I'm also a bit of a health buff... But if I had to try a deep fried food I would love to try deep fried peaches. They probably wouldn't taste all that great but hey, it's something at least (;
7/20/2020 c42 Tauf
Thanks for the chapter. (:
Thanks for the chapter. (:
7/18/2020 c42 Guest
really liking this story
really liking this story
7/17/2020 c42 Raltol Lotlar
copet
What do you mean with he had the advantage of 3 years learning under Jiraya? 3 years and no knew technique, no better use of known techniques, no spy network, no seals, no better CQC, no sage, no etc. And everything mentioned is things Jiraya is good and/or famous for.
To be honest, Jiraya and kakashi have been the worst teachers I have ever seen.
So I think that he will do better here than in canon timeline.
copet
What do you mean with he had the advantage of 3 years learning under Jiraya? 3 years and no knew technique, no better use of known techniques, no spy network, no seals, no better CQC, no sage, no etc. And everything mentioned is things Jiraya is good and/or famous for.
To be honest, Jiraya and kakashi have been the worst teachers I have ever seen.
So I think that he will do better here than in canon timeline.
7/16/2020 c42 1RenegadeSon
I don’t have a favorite deep fried snack actually.
Now, things are started to pick up. This fight scene was really good in my opinion. It feels quite realistic. Itachi has the air of being overwhelming without it seeming like a hack to the story. We also get to see how strong Naruto has become. We didn’t really know considering the time skip. I assume that Kimmimaro is basically fully healthy at this point? I’m interested to see how you interpret his strength then. Orochimaru was indeed quite interested in his body. This fight seems to be taking the place of the fight Naruto has with Itachi in Shippuden where he received Shisui’s eye. I wonder if something similar will happen.
I don’t have a favorite deep fried snack actually.
Now, things are started to pick up. This fight scene was really good in my opinion. It feels quite realistic. Itachi has the air of being overwhelming without it seeming like a hack to the story. We also get to see how strong Naruto has become. We didn’t really know considering the time skip. I assume that Kimmimaro is basically fully healthy at this point? I’m interested to see how you interpret his strength then. Orochimaru was indeed quite interested in his body. This fight seems to be taking the place of the fight Naruto has with Itachi in Shippuden where he received Shisui’s eye. I wonder if something similar will happen.
7/15/2020 c42 1copet
Okay, you really caught my attention. Now we see why Naruto left such an easy trail to follow. What worries me is that in canon, Naruto had training with Jiraya. Here, not so much. There must be something he gained in those 3 years besides such great regeneration. Will this fight show us more? I'm dying to know... Good day!
Okay, you really caught my attention. Now we see why Naruto left such an easy trail to follow. What worries me is that in canon, Naruto had training with Jiraya. Here, not so much. There must be something he gained in those 3 years besides such great regeneration. Will this fight show us more? I'm dying to know... Good day!
7/14/2020 c42 5Psionic108
Wow, you write very well. The fight scene writing reminds me of Jim Butcher's writing style.
Keep it up, this was a short but a good chapter!
Wow, you write very well. The fight scene writing reminds me of Jim Butcher's writing style.
Keep it up, this was a short but a good chapter!